The depth of field is very good in your photo, but I think (and this is from a self taught photographer also) the cut off body of the bird is distracting. Maybe try the same composition techniques, but include the entire bird.
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just as a sidebar note: I have never taken a photo course ...completely self taught here, with lots to learn still.
Thanks for your input.
EyeArt