Linda From Maine wrote:
Fascinating subjects with strong compositions. I find the water tower and palm particularly engaging. Re processing, I wonder about reducing the whites in the clouds (if you have detail there) so that the bright sky doesn't overpower the structures. #1 seems a little dark - always fun to figure out what works best on UHH's mustard yellow - and perhaps would benefit from more separation of tones?
Linda, I appreciate you taking a detailed look. Regarding the skies, I need to go back and re-evaluate the processing. In had just rained. Half the sky was very dark and there was some blue breaking through in other areas. In places the clouds were very hazy rather than clearly defined and parts of the sky were flat, smooth gray. I felt most of these tended to be too dark and I was trying to get some highlights to add a little life. I didn't feel very successful in getting the look I "felt". I think I'll watch a couple of videos on B&W processing and give one or two of these another try.