The background is a bit busy you could try standing the subjects further away from the background if possible also use a bigger aperture f 5 ish to blur the background out more or faster shutter by increasing the ISo but be careful of grain in the picture nice family :P

You had over exposed the first one a bit then try taking images with trigger release so your shadow is not in the image you can stand away when taking images overall composed well :)

I prefer the HDR version very good :-D

The mushrooms are shaggy ink cap very nice pics well done
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Thanks for the input guys al have a look

i like your HDR shots especially the b&w great job

I would like to know about anything to do with HDR photography