Bells wrote:
Thanks for the kind words. I believe you are right about the focus being on the flowers due to the color. I will try to remember your tips at my upcoming wedding. I think I need to develop a technique. I have so very much to learn. Photography is a lifelong hobby that I would like to turn into a small business. I'm afraid to stick my neck out there until I get a clue.
Go ahead and stick your neck out there, that's the way you learn. I'm no pro, just a hobbyist , but I'll tell you what I see, as I say , with my cockeyes I see crooked, and some will disagree with me, but that's why we're here.
1st-too centered, dont like the rails leading to center, little more focus on face instead of photo center
2ndToo centered-focus on face- a little stiff. tell a honeymoon joke and help them to laugh and relax-taking pictures when they dont know you are-usually the best
3rd better, eyes still seem a little dark-move camera to the right some to get chair at bottom out of picture
4th Nice job! even though its cetered, its centered perfectly with no distractions- looks like it shoud be in a catalog
5th Not sure, great focus on the soldier but maybe too much desk
6th Nice pic, too centered, if you could see just a tad bit more of her other eye would be great and soften the flowers, but i like this picture, it doesnt look sooo posed 7th grass in front distracting, and i had to look twice to see the married couple-the guy in front is a handsome lad, but remember the important ones on that day
overall great shots, just a little teaking here and there-wedding shots are telling the story of the day, so dont make them all posed pics, standing back with a long zoom lens makes for some fantastic shots-the couple will say wow i didnt remember taking those, but they will love them -good luck :lol: