GAlanFInk wrote:
You don't know me so don't be upset about my critiques as I have been told I can be 'tactless'.
I hope, in time, your photographs will improve because of input like mine and from others as well.
There are three elements that make a photograph successful: Theme, Composition and, of course, Exposure. Without all three, a photograph loses it's appeal. What you have here is a snapshot that causes the viewer's eye to wander, in other words, there is no 'Subject' to capture their attention.
Although you suggest having a 'person' in the shot is a positive thought to putting someone in the image to maybe improve on it, you have to ask yourself, "Would that person be the Theme or Subject in the photograph?"
The reflections neither improve nor detract from the image. In fact, they play little if any on the output. You seem to have been interested in the light fixtures (?), blow dryers on stilts (?) as your point of interest but didn't really grasp the viewer because of Composition, or better said, attention to them.
About the only thing I can say, and again, this is only my opinion so don't place any weight upon it, is that you DID get the Exposure well.
It could be a very interesting abstract perhaps if composed differently (?).
and now I'll sit back and get slapped by the rest of the members.
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I see that you just joined our group, welcome aboard.
Sometimes being a bit tactless myself.
You'll soon learn the Linda is one of our premier contributors. Your advice & input are welcome but unnecessary, as you obviously haven't seen any of her past post.
You sound like an experienced photographer, please show use some of your work.