I’d love to see her face.
I think the black and white treatment looks a little too grim. It would have been fine in all color. Just my opinion.
What it says to me is that, although her body has aged, her heart is still young. I think that applies to many elderly people and your picture expresses it far better than words can.
Dannj wrote:
I’d love to see her face.
Yes but that was part of the agreement
vertigo wrote:
Yes but that was part of the agreement
Understood.
But you’ve seen her...I’m sure she’s a lovely woman.
She brings to mind an old woman I’d sometimes see while I was out walking. She’d be outside tending to her garden or raking leaves. Sometimes she would just wave, sometimes we would chat...about the weather, her flowers, her aching hips or my aching knees. She must have been in her late 80s, early 90s but she was as beautiful as any 20 year old as I’ve ever seen. Long grayish/white hair she kept in a pony tail. A slender face weathered by her years of gardening and amazing milky blue eyes. Funny, but I never knew her name. She asked me what mine was one day but stopped me before I could answer, laughing as she said “don’t bother, I won’t remember it anyway”.
I didn’t see her for several weeks and a neighbor told me she had moved. There was a van at the house one day with a woman she assumed was her daughter. The neighbor took a minute to bring her groceries inside but by the time she came back out the van and the women were gone...no farewells, no forwarding address. I was sad, wish I had taken time to get to know her, sad that I wouldn’t see her again.
Or have I?
Being as I turn 80 on the 25 of this Mo. It gave me something to look forward to. (Thanks)
One of the best photos I've ever seen in this section. Very touching-don't change a thing! I love it!
Fantastic work. What an opportunity to produce a really nice work of art.
--Bob
vertigo wrote:
I have been reading and cogitating on a lot of the recent images and some of the posted replies and/or critiques. So here is one that applies to some of the discussions. Is the model to "old?" Is the problem that the image is cropped? Is it a problem that it is post processed? Is it a problem that wrinkled , veins, sunspots haven't been smoothed out? All things that have come up recently. So comment on the problems, or critique the image. Note that she was 93 years old. Also note she is not a relative, was a volunteer, signed a release, and was definitely the sweetest model I ever worked with. May she now RIP.
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Decades ago (ironically) I was at a poetry reading by Alastair Reid, where he read his "Old Painter to Young Model." It was brilliant. I had a copy of his book with it, but that's long gone and my Internet-fu has been weak with this search. I do remember the closing lines:
Forgive me my age
As I forgive you your youth
My truth is not your truth
Oh...I completely love the image and wouldn't change a thing!
Naptown Gaijin wrote:
Bingo... you get it...
Thank you everyone. For me it is one of the most emotive photo I have managed to record. I did try it in all B&W, in full color, and in color with the saturation reduced, but for me this one worked best--thank you for pushing me to try the others.
I agree with a number of other respondents. I wouldn't change a thing on this wonderful photograph. Fantastic job.
I think i would like it more if it were fully B&W. Otherwise, quite striking.
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