Hannah age 16
Jan 17, 2019 13:39:25 #
bertloomis
Loc: Fort Worth, Texas
You already seem professional to me. Beautiful young lady and beautiful shots!
Jan 17, 2019 13:51:19 #
Very photogenic model and excellent posing. I cannot add anything that has not been said so I'll just say, very good work.
Jan 17, 2019 14:05:15 #
Jan 17, 2019 14:17:07 #
Jan 17, 2019 16:16:52 #
These look professional for free. Looks like you have portraits nailed and can move on. Extremely well done.
Jan 17, 2019 17:54:15 #
Did you consider having her gaze elsewhere other than the camera?
Jan 17, 2019 18:05:29 #
Watch how you photograph her hands. You chopped them off on photo 1, you folded finger in #2 her hand is blurred. Also her elbow looks like it is floating in space and is disconnected. Photo #3, don't place her hand between her legs. In photo #7 she had flying fingers on her upper hand---look at her little finger how awkward it looks. Photo #8 looks like her fingers are cut off (they are bent ). The backs make the hand look fat.
Mostly, you work is pretty good.
Mostly, you work is pretty good.
Jan 17, 2019 19:42:00 #
Jan 17, 2019 19:44:15 #
hookedupin2005
Loc: Northwestern New Mexico
kadams wrote:
This photo shoot was done at the regional park in Brentwood Ca. Round Valley.
Great location to do shoots. It's becoming very popular with photographers.
My model Hannah is a former cheerleader at her high school. Fun personality which made my work easier and fun to photograph.
I'm trying to better my photography. I'm still trying to reach that professional level... Hope you enjoy my work.
CC welcome, just be nice about it. Thank you
Great location to do shoots. It's becoming very popular with photographers.
My model Hannah is a former cheerleader at her high school. Fun personality which made my work easier and fun to photograph.
I'm trying to better my photography. I'm still trying to reach that professional level... Hope you enjoy my work.
CC welcome, just be nice about it. Thank you
In my opinion, even though you don't think you are at a professional level,you are really,really close. Your images are fantastic. That being said, I have one little thing that stood out: In Hannah3, you should have moved yourself a little, or had her move, so that you are not shooting "up her skirt". Otherwise you did a fine job. Well done.
Jan 17, 2019 19:46:36 #
I like them all, but I especially like No. 2, No. 8 and No.9. I agree with some that find the leaves in the foreground a bit of a distraction with No.2, but at the same time, the leaves to the left and right frame her face - sort of like the effect you got with No. 8. The one with the horse... well - who can resist the one with the horse? Great Work. Did you direct her with choices of clothing, hair, and make-up? It all comes together so well. Thank you for sharing.
Jan 17, 2019 20:16:41 #
It is a nice portfolio. The girl is cute, and she blended very well into the background. Obviously, you did a great job; not only directing the shooting but, nicely blurring her surroundings.
Jan 17, 2019 20:51:59 #
Jan 17, 2019 21:11:25 #
KenW
Loc: Portland OR
Excellent photography with a very pretty young lady. Good choice of camera, as I just bought the D750 with the same lens for Christmas.
Jan 17, 2019 21:25:34 #
Such a beautiful model. How could you have gone wrong. I think you did a very professional job, the minor comments for doing better are valid but mostly not critical. I think 2, 6, and 8 are the best three.
Jan 17, 2019 22:38:52 #
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