Hannah age 16
Jan 17, 2019 08:13:36 #
mas24
Loc: Southern CA
Excellent work. I loved all of them. As an amateur, I do free portraits, once a year for Veterans. None, can compare to your work. The teen model is stunning too.
Jan 17, 2019 08:45:17 #
These are some very nice photos. You did a great job! Can’t pick my favorite.
Jan 17, 2019 08:57:49 #
Jan 17, 2019 09:10:00 #
The quality of your work is way above standard. The composition, control of light and subject are all very well done. One exception, I would watch the background in the very last one. Nicely done.
George
George
Jan 17, 2019 09:13:13 #
Jan 17, 2019 10:16:18 #
davyboy
Loc: Anoka Mn.
kadams wrote:
This photo shoot was done at the regional park in Brentwood Ca. Round Valley.
Great location to do shoots. It's becoming very popular with photographers.
My model Hannah is a former cheerleader at her high school. Fun personality which made my work easier and fun to photograph.
I'm trying to better my photography. I'm still trying to reach that professional level... Hope you enjoy my work.
CC welcome, just be nice about it. Thank you
Great location to do shoots. It's becoming very popular with photographers.
My model Hannah is a former cheerleader at her high school. Fun personality which made my work easier and fun to photograph.
I'm trying to better my photography. I'm still trying to reach that professional level... Hope you enjoy my work.
CC welcome, just be nice about it. Thank you
Absolutely stunningly beautiful shots! I love the color and composition. You and your model should both be proud.🤓
Jan 17, 2019 10:37:30 #
Image #3 - Foreground foliage is a bit distracting. Other than that -
A great folio of images of the young lady. You've captured her personality very nicely, and the compositions and exposures are spot on. Couldn't ask for a better grouping.
Great job!!
A great folio of images of the young lady. You've captured her personality very nicely, and the compositions and exposures are spot on. Couldn't ask for a better grouping.
Great job!!
Jan 17, 2019 10:39:07 #
Very nice Kimberly. Captivating shots of a fetching lady. Great poses.
Jan 17, 2019 10:49:02 #
Don W-37
Loc: Bangkok, Thailand
I think your work has reached professional quality. If Hannah was my daughter, I would certainly buy those photos! Keep up the good work!
Jan 17, 2019 11:16:32 #
Jan 17, 2019 11:16:43 #
kadams wrote:
This photo shoot was done at the regional park in Brentwood Ca. Round Valley.
Great location to do shoots. It's becoming very popular with photographers.
My model Hannah is a former cheerleader at her high school. Fun personality which made my work easier and fun to photograph.
I'm trying to better my photography. I'm still trying to reach that professional level... Hope you enjoy my work.
CC welcome, just be nice about it. Thank you
Great location to do shoots. It's becoming very popular with photographers.
My model Hannah is a former cheerleader at her high school. Fun personality which made my work easier and fun to photograph.
I'm trying to better my photography. I'm still trying to reach that professional level... Hope you enjoy my work.
CC welcome, just be nice about it. Thank you
Nice light, settings, model, expressions.
My only suggestions center around not cutting off hands, not having stiff arms and fingers, and avoiding cropping at joints (knees or wrists or elbows). Straight on poses are generally less interesting than angular ones, but that last one is fine. Building a triangular base into both poses and compositions can add balance and eye flow.
Spend time getting fingers into relaxed positions. Eliminate distractions and include points of interest that complement the clothing, mood, etc. You’re on your way to getting that very right.
If you have a medium telephoto lens (85mm or 100-105mm on full frame; 50 to 85mm on APS-C, or 42.5 to 55mm on Micro 4/3), try some more intimate, tightly cropped head compositions, especially with a subject this photogenic. Actually, a few of these could benefit from some tighter cropping.
All in all, a few of these are gold! Her family should love them.
Jan 17, 2019 11:19:06 #
Beautiful work! Be careful not to cut fingers off or to stop your photos at joints, ie: knees, wrists. The catch light from your flash would look better if it were higher in the eye. Is your flash on camera? If so, you can use a bracket to bring your flash a little higher. A cord or wireless transmitter and receiver can be used to keep your camera and flash connected. I look forward to seeing more of your portraits.
Jan 17, 2019 11:33:46 #
I agree whole heartedly, hope she finds a young man that will appreciate her wholesome charm.
Jan 17, 2019 12:58:02 #
Methinks you are already a pro!
Old Timer wrote:
All good but no# 2 and 5 jump out to me, eyes have it.
Jan 17, 2019 13:34:17 #
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