Critique Wanted
Oct 27, 2011 17:32:42 #
usetobe wrote:
I would like to know how the composition is in these pictures. Also I did some post editing do you think they look ok or did I mess them up?
Taken with a Canon G12. The tire swing: ISO 80, F4.5 1/500. Pumpkins: ISO 80, F4.5, 1/400.
The rose: ISO 320, F2.8, 1/250.
Taken with a Canon G12. The tire swing: ISO 80, F4.5 1/500. Pumpkins: ISO 80, F4.5, 1/400.
The rose: ISO 320, F2.8, 1/250.
hey ex-[used to be]teehee--you asked about "comp"..I don't
think, any of them, are bad..big question are YOU happy with them..if it had been me,,I would have had my helper[small boy w/2 men to beat him] up the tree to be sure the tire stayed in position. rotated the tire so I could shoot through the tire to the
washtub,close enough that tub and a bit of area around it in view..
in the second one,I think I would have tried to move a bit to the right[or move the barrow],so the barrow-n-punkins were more at the base of the tree.
the third--is beautiful..if I could view all around for better background[color/etc],then I may have changed position,to include that background[even blurred background can be important]..
as for you post production,,no comment,, [don't know anything about it--cause I don't do it]sorry..
best of luck--keep shooting/posting..--joe
just remembered,,,with my ideas,,[rule of thirds] adjust to what
YOU like best...[pick your own third...]
Oct 27, 2011 18:41:54 #
Oct 31, 2011 18:13:10 #
B & W was a great choice with the tire, I liked it better than the color one, but you did a good job with the edited version. The flower looked a little too unnatural to me, thanks for posting!
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