c49smith wrote:
You're composition is lovely. I like the B&W, and agree with your assessment of the lines in the umbrella. My only critique would be for the model's face to be a few more degrees toward the camera. The umbrella does draw me toward her eye and I would like to see more of it. The nipple peeking out through the strands of hair is a nice touch.... easy to overlook....C
I've never found a nipple easy to overlook.