Chewin' The Fat Constructive criticism invited
Oct 31, 2013 13:09:46 #
Having read the comments posted on this shot, I find myself in a minority of one. I very much enjoy seeing your monochromes, and while I like the creativity you show, this one doesn't work well for me. The background is simply too distracting. The chair rungs add lines, their pants add dots and camouflage, and the graffiti swarms about their heads, all working at odds to your subjects.
As a suggestion, I'd like to see this one in color. I think that would end the distractions and let your geezers really stand out from their setting. Again, minority of one, and my opinion only. But better an honest opinion than nothing at all. And I DO like the geezers!
As a suggestion, I'd like to see this one in color. I think that would end the distractions and let your geezers really stand out from their setting. Again, minority of one, and my opinion only. But better an honest opinion than nothing at all. And I DO like the geezers!
Oct 31, 2013 13:33:28 #
Treepusher wrote:
Having read the comments posted on this shot, I fi... (show quote)
Hello Treepusher, thanks for commenting. My objective is to depict places and people as they are. My image shows these interesting people in their environment (natural habitat?). I can't pick the background and graffiti is an intrinsic aspect of Brick Lane. Also, I can't more than a split second to capture the image as once they see the camera the moment is gone.
Whilst I will try to add impact and drama to an image I won't try to beautify it. As to colour, I had always envisaged this in monochrome, the gentleman on the right was wearing a very brilliant orange T shirt and this totally dominated the picture to the detriment of the other subjects.
Thanks again for your input.
Graham
Oct 31, 2013 15:21:16 #
Graham Smith wrote:
A trio of Brick Lane geezers.
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Graham this just says quality, well done a fantastic capture As I see it, young motor bike enthusiast
(helmet on arm) quizzes old TT rider (Manx tattoo) and central character probably had a bike run over his nose. Sorry I watched Poirot last night and it hasn't worn off yet
Oct 31, 2013 17:23:43 #
Froggy
Loc: Guernsey Channel Islands UK
Graham Smith wrote:
A trio of Brick Lane geezers.
Leica M9P
Graham
Leica M9P
Graham
wow Graham, this is the first time I have actually downloaded one of the photos on UHH, and this really stood out and hit me, love the clarity and the detail on it. Brilliant yet again
Oct 31, 2013 17:27:01 #
Great photo, Graham, and you may not understand this comment, but it looks like some of the Boston Red Sox reminiscing about their 2013 World Series victory at some time in the future (for those in the UK, many of the Red Sox players wore pretty full beards).
Oct 31, 2013 17:28:19 #
You do indeed have the gift. I'm blown away with your focus on details and the story line. A pictures says a thousand.............................
Oct 31, 2013 17:33:24 #
SteveR wrote:
Great photo, Graham, and you may not understand this comment, but it looks like some of the Boston Red Sox reminiscing about their 2013 World Series victory at some time in the future (for those in the UK, many of the Red Sox players wore pretty full beards).
Thanks Steve. Just a quick question, are the Red Sox a cricket team? ;-)
Graham
Oct 31, 2013 17:35:19 #
Bigal wrote:
Graham this just says quality, well done a fantastic capture As I see it, young motor bike enthusiast
(helmet on arm) quizzes old TT rider (Manx tattoo) and central character probably had a bike run over his nose. Sorry I watched Poirot last night and it hasn't worn off yet
(helmet on arm) quizzes old TT rider (Manx tattoo) and central character probably had a bike run over his nose. Sorry I watched Poirot last night and it hasn't worn off yet
You don't miss much do you Alan :-)
Thank you.
Graham
Oct 31, 2013 17:36:06 #
As good as they smack the ball; they may be fairly good at it. Keep up your keen eye, your brilliant knack for capturing uniquely awesome shots in spot-on clarity; and most of all your zest for life and sense of humor.
Nov 1, 2013 06:31:48 #
Nov 1, 2013 08:41:53 #
Graham Smith wrote:
Hello Treepusher, thanks for commenting. My object... (show quote)
Totally agree with you Graham, I love real life photos.
If you want to ponce up pics in Photoshop then you don`t even need a camera, just download off the net and mix em up how you like.
Like you say real people in their own environment wins every time, background and all, it`s all part of the story. :-)
Nov 1, 2013 09:03:02 #
Graham Smith wrote:
A trio of Brick Lane geezers.
Leica M9P
Graham
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Mr. Smith, you are a very fine photographer with a good eye for people, composition and engagement. I am happy to see your work.
Thank you,
Bruce
Nov 1, 2013 10:12:29 #
Another GREAT job, Graham! Your photo really brings out their characters ... which I like.
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