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Oct 10, 2022 10:49:15 #
jackpinoh
Loc: Kettering, OH 45419
Manglesphoto wrote:
Nice!!
But the three white spot and the bright green lamp are a distraction
Nice!!But the three white spot and the bright green lamp are a distraction
Oct 10, 2022 11:14:33 #
Nice photo. The green lamp is somewhat distracting. Looks like it’s growing out of her nose.
Oct 10, 2022 11:30:54 #
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Oct 10, 2022 12:12:47 #
It is amazing that, no matter how careful you are, you mess things which can mess up a shoot. With digital photography, you can take many more images, different views, etc, then choose the perfect one, further with Photoshop, you then can fix things you missed. During film days, it was much more difficult.
Oct 10, 2022 15:19:13 #
Oct 10, 2022 15:20:36 #
toxdoc42 wrote:
During film days, it was much more difficult.
Yeah— in the film days you needed a camera!
Oct 10, 2022 16:00:42 #
RightOnPhotography
Loc: Quebec,QC
Manglesphoto wrote: Nice!!
But the three white spot and the bright green lamp are a distraction
Nice!!But the three white spot and the bright green lamp are a distraction
Her hands are a distraction 😊
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Oct 10, 2022 16:59:18 #
Oct 11, 2022 09:18:37 #
Rab-Eye wrote:
Yeah— in the film days you needed a camera!
It may be that he had to take the call at that point.
Oct 11, 2022 15:23:37 #
Oct 11, 2022 18:41:38 #
Paul Diamond
Loc: Atlanta, GA, USA
Hi,
This is constructive. For any of your pictures, try the thumb/forefinger test for cropping. Or the same two fingers from both hands to crop the image (on your computer). You may find you have multiple pictures where you originally thought of it as one. Or, cropping might help the viewer focus their attention where you want them to look and what you want them to see.
And, you can also use your thumb. Use it to block out something in the picture. If that item is missing, does it help the viewer to focus or refocus their attention away from what you are blocking out with your thumb?
The green lamp, for me, fails the thumb test. When my thumb blocks out the green lamp, growing out of her nose, it helps me 'focus' more on her. And I like your photo even better.
This is constructive. For any of your pictures, try the thumb/forefinger test for cropping. Or the same two fingers from both hands to crop the image (on your computer). You may find you have multiple pictures where you originally thought of it as one. Or, cropping might help the viewer focus their attention where you want them to look and what you want them to see.
And, you can also use your thumb. Use it to block out something in the picture. If that item is missing, does it help the viewer to focus or refocus their attention away from what you are blocking out with your thumb?
The green lamp, for me, fails the thumb test. When my thumb blocks out the green lamp, growing out of her nose, it helps me 'focus' more on her. And I like your photo even better.
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Oct 12, 2022 13:42:21 #
Oct 14, 2022 08:08:03 #
I agree with the comments about distractions in the background. I tend to be too distracted - or "focused" on the model when I shoot nudes and often just don't see background distractions - or worse, cut off the feet... But it is a beautiful soft rendering of the model in repose.
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