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Oct 9, 2022 11:53:08 #
mackie wrote:
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Nice!!But the three white spot and the bright green lamp are a distraction
Oct 9, 2022 12:08:09 #
Manglesphoto wrote: Nice!!
But the three white spot and the bright green lamp are a distraction
Nice!!But the three white spot and the bright green lamp are a distraction
I could do without the spots, but the green lamp adds interest and balance for me, picking up some of the colour of the sheet at lower-left.
Oct 9, 2022 12:12:26 #
JohnFrim wrote:
I could do without the spots, but the green lamp adds interest and balance for me, picking up some of the colour of the sheet at lower-left.
Well John nobody ever accused me of being balanced
Oct 9, 2022 12:13:29 #
Manglesphoto wrote:
Well John nobody ever accused me of being balanced
Is poor balance why you sit in that chair all day?
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Oct 9, 2022 14:45:44 #
JohnFrim wrote:
Is poor balance why you sit in that chair all day?
Ive been sitting in that chair over 20 yrs, as long as people wait on me why move?
Oct 9, 2022 14:56:27 #
RogStrix
Loc: UK
Manglesphoto wrote: Nice!!
But the three white spot and the bright green lamp are a distraction
Nice!!But the three white spot and the bright green lamp are a distraction
I'm with Mangles on this, plus I'd like to see the piece of wood directly above her head removed to as it tend to merge with her hair.
You've come on nicely since your early pictures, so well done both of you, photographer and model!
Oct 9, 2022 16:58:50 #
As long as you're accepting comments, I would get rid of the spots at her feet and the lamp protruding from her nose. I do like the shot though. Especially the rosy cheeks.
Oct 9, 2022 19:14:25 #
I agree, and I really am not a lover of cluttered backgrounds, the end of the bed, etc. I wish I could practice what I preach though, since covid, no access to studio or models, except myself, and you wouldn't be interested in an old man! So I do apologize for being critical.
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Oct 10, 2022 05:34:20 #
Mackie, did you use a longer mm lens? The reason I guessed that, because there is no exaggeration "foreshortening" of head making it look out of proportion; short mm lenses tend to do that.
Yes I like the photo model and pose. A bit of clone work would remove 3 dots of white, the bed shadow, the right wall area, and the lamp.
Yes I like the photo model and pose. A bit of clone work would remove 3 dots of white, the bed shadow, the right wall area, and the lamp.
Oct 10, 2022 06:07:44 #
The image is excellent. To me, this, is the essence if boudoir photography. But, I do have to agree with some of the other folks, the three dots and the green lamp are a bit of a distraction. The person being photographed is the main attraction, and the eye should remain on her. In every other way, you have done a beautiful image!
Oct 10, 2022 09:58:24 #
Great boudoir shot and like the angle that the picture was taken from. Thanks for sharing. I did nothing the spots and what others have mentioned but to be honest I was too interested in the rest of the picture to be that distracted.
Oct 10, 2022 10:42:15 #
azted
Loc: Las Vegas, NV.
Interesting pose, and nice skin colors. I don't mind the three dots, but the chartreuse lamp? Blech!
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