Linda From Maine wrote:
I like the idea very much. The man's placement bothers me a little; I'm thinking if he was more to the left, the result would feel less static. Even a change in his size offers possibilities, maybe?
I tried a lot of placements and croppings on the original. As I remember, and this was some time ago, I introduced a slight vignette to this one and that was as far as I got until I introduced the clouds. Hadn’t given it too much thought since. Centered preserved in some way how I perceived him to be lost in his thoughts. You think he could have been smaller?