What is going on with the bottom 1/3 of the picture? Did you clone or attempt to clone the canyon?
Also whats the yellow arc on the right side?
winhto
Loc: Edmonds, Washington
Sure the skies in Bryce don't look anything like the photo in October, cz I have been there twice, both in October. Your photo looks nice and very eye catching! I don't like boring picture.
Great subject, composition is nice but a little too much saturation for me.
Fotoartist wrote:
Take the saturation down 50% and see if you still like it.
I would tone down the HDR too.
Thanks to everyone for your comments and recommendations? Great site!
Robdale wrote:
The dead tree caught my attention at Bryce Canyon in Utah. Bryce was our favorite of all the parks.
Yes take down the saturation by half and see if it meets your standards.
I did take down the saturation and looks fine. Thanks
Nice shot. But I agree with Fotoartist to much saturation
Fotoartist wrote:
Take the saturation down 50% and see if you still like it.
Agreed unless the color has not been enhanced, in which case I would keep as is to represent reality. I shot an amazing sunset, and the colors have not been touched. It's just as I observed it.
Dedham, MA. 2019. iPhone 6s.
Very nice opportunity. I think the scene caused you to get a bit too enthusiastic with the saturation. Additionally, the almost dead center placement of the tree lends little to the composition. It should be off, probably, to the left side. Not all the way mind you. Just a bit left of center, probably a diameter and a half of the bottom of the tree trunk.
--Bob
Robdale wrote:
The dead tree caught my attention at Bryce Canyon in Utah. Bryce was our favorite of all the parks.
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