My self portraits
May 9, 2020 09:27:49 #
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May 9, 2020 09:53:31 #
rightxposure2193 wrote:
This is a self portrait using window light where do I need to improve
Good Job man.......I would not change a thing. It has to please you first & foremost. Each version has it's own drama and exclusively so and either will work depending on your intentions.
The treatments to them might be an area to explore for you. Print them out differently and using various papers and silver treatments to add brilliance or more luminance to the B&W version as an example.
The choice is yours to make. Good luck and nice work sir.
May 9, 2020 09:58:17 #
Tom Iskiyan
Loc: Highlands Ranch, Colorado
I think both are excellent! I’ve always preferred color. But when you’re that handsome, you can’t go wrong either way! Keep them coming.
Tom
Tom
May 9, 2020 10:06:35 #
StanMac
Loc: Tennessee
rightxposure2193 wrote:
This is a self portrait using window light where do I need to improve
I don’t think these can be improved on! Wonderful images!
Stan
May 9, 2020 10:28:35 #
May 9, 2020 10:41:08 #
paparue wrote:
I think both are absolutely wonderful, and its a great way to get the look you like. Well done
I agree.
May 9, 2020 10:43:26 #
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May 9, 2020 10:56:45 #
May 9, 2020 10:59:49 #
Wow, outstanding! I love them both. I'm wondering if you can bring out your black shirt just a little bit in the black and white. Just a hint of the shirt might keep the head shot from floating in the black background. Just my opinion, but it is outstanding as it is. The color one is my favorite, really brings out personality and features. Excellent shots!! Hang 'em on the wall!
May 9, 2020 11:07:16 #
Great.
perhaps a little more breathing room to the right edge.
and a little more light on your chest area below your
chin (of the monochrome) so you don't look like
a face floating in space...
Or crop tighter, so there is no negative space (of the monochrome):
perhaps a little more breathing room to the right edge.
and a little more light on your chest area below your
chin (of the monochrome) so you don't look like
a face floating in space...
Or crop tighter, so there is no negative space (of the monochrome):
79 year old Jimi Hendrix
May 9, 2020 11:18:16 #
May 9, 2020 11:18:56 #
rightxposure2193 wrote:
This is a self portrait using window light where do I need to improve
Both are great. I think the black and white is exceptional.
May 9, 2020 11:28:03 #
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