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Feb 29, 2020 09:10:27   #
mffox Loc: Avon, CT
 
Linda From Maine wrote:
The center element in #1 kind of divides the image into two parts. Perhaps crop from the left side, making that element run closer to the edge of frame, and lift the shadows some. I sent you a pm.

In #2 the gravel path takes up a lot of space but leads us out of the frame. A potentially interesting element - the cliffs - are in shadow. Zooming in, I see several editing issues with the sky where it meets the landscape, as well as a distinctive hard-brush attempt at lightening the distant group of trees. Crop out the sliver of person on the right.

In #4 the landscape is very busy with lots of same-sized, same-color elements, much of which is due to the light (time of day). Perhaps consider cropping out some of the sky and a lot of the foreground? Work with curves or levels to try to separate tones a bit.

#3 could be awesome, but there is a distinctive white line where your sky meets the landscape, especially at the top left. You replaced the sky or did extensive editing?

For me the light was not your friend in any of these choices. Were the photos taken during a tour/trip when you didn't have the luxury of scouting or shooting in golden hour or appropriate time of day for shadows?

My own favorite landscapes have been a combination of right time (for example, just after sunrise or in clearing fog, or for autumn colors) and right place, or at a location I had visited before and was familiar with. They also represent many hundreds of miles of roaming the countryside over a five-year span
The center element in #1 kind of divides the image... (show quote)


Thank you, Linda for taking the time to put together a critique as wells suggestions for improvement. I value your opinion; you set a good example for all of us on UHH.

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Feb 29, 2020 09:11:27   #
mffox Loc: Avon, CT
 
jackm1943 wrote:
I think #2 has a lot of potential but would require quite a lot PP, including cropping off much of he foreground, color toning, and maybe some softening of the very background. Good luck.
I agree with the others that #3 has a lot of potential also.


Thank you for your help. Your suggestions are well taken.

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Feb 29, 2020 09:12:06   #
mffox Loc: Avon, CT
 
Longshadow wrote:
Even with the horizon artifacts in number two, I'd hang it on my wall.


Thank you for your attention.

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Feb 29, 2020 09:13:51   #
mffox Loc: Avon, CT
 
Linda From Maine wrote:
How about your Jordan Pond shot?
https://www.uglyhedgehog.com/t-544493-1.html

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That's not a bad idea; I've always thought that was a good shot. Thanks again.

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Feb 29, 2020 09:16:19   #
mffox Loc: Avon, CT
 
CO wrote:
It would be #3 for me but I would crop away the sliver of water at the bottom. That little bit of water at the bottom is more of a distraction. The water would have been good to include if the photo was not cropped so tightly. Did you crop the photo that tightly in software or did you shoot it like that?

I agree with Linda From Maine about the light edges around the top of the mountain. It looks like a poor Photoshop selection when replacing a sky. If you did replace the sky, you needed to make a more refined edge selection. A good judge will spot that in a competition.

Photo #2 has a sickly blue sky in the upper middle of the photo that looks unnatural. The person on the right edge of the photo would need to be cropped out.

Photo #4 is the last one I would pick. The midday sun is harsh and flat. The photo has no focus. The eye wanders around. It's not clear what we should be looking at.
It would be #3 for me but I would crop away the sl... (show quote)


Thank you for your help; your suggestions are right on.

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Feb 29, 2020 09:17:19   #
mffox Loc: Avon, CT
 
bbrown5154 wrote:
#2 but you need to crop the woman out on the right.
Not sure whats going on with #3 it looks "manipulated" like you added the sky from another shot, and the hillside resolution is off.
If so thats probably a big no no in your competition.


Thank you for your help.

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Feb 29, 2020 09:18:29   #
mffox Loc: Avon, CT
 
Wanda Krack wrote:
#2, after a bottom crop, relatively heavy, and a slight crop on the right.


Thank you for your help.

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Feb 29, 2020 09:19:22   #
mffox Loc: Avon, CT
 
angler wrote:
Three for me and I liked them all.


Thank you Jim. I value your opinion.

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Feb 29, 2020 09:46:17   #
Toby
 
Linda From Maine wrote:
The center element in #1 kind of divides the image into two parts. Perhaps crop from the left side, making that element run closer to the edge of frame, and lift the shadows some. I sent you a pm.

In #2 the gravel path takes up a lot of space but leads us out of the frame. A potentially interesting element - the cliffs - are in shadow. Zooming in, I see several editing issues with the sky where it meets the landscape, as well as a distinctive hard-brush attempt at lightening the distant group of trees. Crop out the sliver of person on the right.

In #4 the landscape is very busy with lots of same-sized, same-color elements, much of which is due to the light (time of day). Perhaps consider cropping out some of the sky and a lot of the foreground? Work with curves or levels to try to separate tones a bit.

#3 could be awesome, but there is a distinctive white line where your sky meets the landscape, especially at the top left. You replaced the sky or did extensive editing?

For me the light was not your friend in any of these choices. Were the photos taken during a tour/trip when you didn't have the luxury of scouting or shooting in golden hour or appropriate time of day for shadows?

My own favorite landscapes have been a combination of right time (for example, just after sunrise or in clearing fog, or for autumn colors) and right place, or at a location I had visited before and was familiar with. They also represent many hundreds of miles of roaming the countryside over a five-year span
The center element in #1 kind of divides the image... (show quote)


Good eye Linda. I agree with you

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Feb 29, 2020 10:22:57   #
rmalarz Loc: Tempe, Arizona
 
The first one, as it has less blown-out clouds as the rest.
--Bob
mffox wrote:
I'm new to landscape photo competition, so would appreciate a bit of guidance. If you had to choose one of these images for a competition, which would it be?

Thanks for your consideration.

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Feb 29, 2020 11:01:07   #
CO
 
I hope it's OK. I took photo #3 and did an expand canvas and content aware fill in Photoshop to see how it would look if it wasn't cropped so tightly. Because I had to do the content aware fill in sections, the expanded portions are kind of choppy. I just wanted to see how it would be. The sliver of water at the bottom of the original is not enough to keep in - it becomes a little bit of a distraction. By having more water, it's worth including in the photo. Is your original shot cropped that tightly? If it's not, maybe you could crop not so tightly. Just my idea.

More water at the bottom and a little more sky at the top
More water at the bottom and a little more sky at ...
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Feb 29, 2020 11:05:19   #
Longshadow Loc: Audubon, PA, United States
 
Linda From Maine wrote:
At ease, Marine. The OP and I have been corresponding regularly.


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Feb 29, 2020 11:15:47   #
traderjohn Loc: New York City
 
Linda From Maine wrote:
At ease, Marine. The OP and I have been corresponding regularly.


No problem. To me, who remembers pictures from 3 years ago and who took them?
Yankee Papa ...out.

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Feb 29, 2020 11:21:36   #
ICN3S Loc: Cave Junction, OR
 
#1 but crop off the right side and make it square!

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Feb 29, 2020 12:37:05   #
Longshadow Loc: Audubon, PA, United States
 
ICN3S wrote:
#1 but crop off the right side and make it square!


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To me the bush (tree) on the right gives the image depth.

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