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Aug 4, 2021 21:25:01   #
Cany143 Loc: SE Utah
 
ebrunner wrote:
I really like the background. I would not have guessed this to be a fence post; it has a rusty something attached to it. I think it works. I'm guessing that this is a composite image. It looks really well put together. Nice photo.
Erich


Not a composite. Its simply what was, albeit with the background isolated and modified. Apart from having brought up the shadow areas in 'the subject,' the colors (in the post/rusty thingie) have not been altered.

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Aug 4, 2021 22:35:24   #
Curmudgeon Loc: SE Arizona
 
R.G. wrote:
If you look closely you may be able to spot that the tractor has lost some of its showroom polish . Oh well - the "as new" look is destined to be temporary and sometimes fleeting. Perhaps it spent too long out working in the heat of the day....
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Seems fairly clear that it burned but probably not from the heat of the day. I'm going to guess it was abandoned after the insurance paid off.

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Aug 5, 2021 02:26:26   #
R.G. Loc: Scotland
 
captivecookie wrote:
Terribly sorry, but there seems to be a scratch... just there.

This is a good one for color. The tones in black and white would have been so subtle something would surely be lost.


I was wondering who would be the first to pick up on the scratch . Returning to it I though the saturation was perhaps a bit strong, but as you say, subtlety is probably not the best option.

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Aug 5, 2021 02:29:44   #
R.G. Loc: Scotland
 
ebrunner wrote:
The interest here is: What happened? It looks like it was stripped of most of its parts. Were they used elsewhere? Cool.
Erich


The remains of the tyres are still on the wheel rims, which suggests that a fairly intense fire stripped the tractor of anything combustible. There's a glimpse of green on the front fork assembly, which suggests it may have been a John Deere. Apart from that it would be difficult to tell.

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Aug 5, 2021 02:33:37   #
R.G. Loc: Scotland
 
Curmudgeon wrote:
Seems fairly clear that it burned but probably not from the heat of the day. I'm going to guess it was abandoned after the insurance paid off.


Hot summers in Scotland?? Not much chance of pulling that one off . Going by the extent of the damage it must have been an intense fire at another location and the remains were taken away as scrap.

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Aug 5, 2021 05:04:49   #
ebrunner Loc: New Jersey Shore
 
Cany143 wrote:
Not a composite. Its simply what was, albeit with the background isolated and modified. Apart from having brought up the shadow areas in 'the subject,' the colors (in the post/rusty thingie) have not been altered.


Very nice.

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Aug 5, 2021 07:12:46   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
cbtsam wrote:
I took this one a little over three years ago, again focused on the wabi-sabi idea of the beauty of the less than pristine, as we're describing it here...
The fragility of life. Exquisite work.

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Aug 5, 2021 07:15:18   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
Gauss wrote:
Here's an updated version. Just tweaks as I tend to take conservative steps to avoid over doing things. My concerns when initial working on this image were fringing along the edges of the building and halos around the trees. Anyway, I believe a got a bit more dynamics in the sky and better contrast on the building. Thanks for the comment captive.

Also, for anyone who didn't realize it, the path on the left side of the image is actually a very non-pristine rail bed for the spur to this building.
Here's an updated version. Just tweaks as I tend t... (show quote)
Very nice subtle improvements when viewing side by side with the first you posted.

I did think that looked at a bit like a rail bed when I viewed the first time

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Aug 5, 2021 07:18:57   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
cbtsam wrote:
It's a pretty cool image, Linda. Having the top of the stack of boxes so close to the middle doesn't seem to me to work as well as it might. What would you think of cropping down from the top a bit? Or do you feel that all that hillside is important to your image?
Thank you very much, Sam. I do tend to enjoy the "kitchen sink" images (coined by MinnieV several years ago, I believe) and I was looking for evidence of the burn, so I probably wouldn't like more top cut off. I'll look at the original again, per your suggestion. I cropped out a lot of foreground and a bit of blue sky; let me see what I have to work with

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Aug 5, 2021 07:22:31   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
Cany143 wrote:
Can't rightly say I had the topic in mind per se, and I very definitely won't say it expresses some so-called 'Master In Me,' but earlier today I was out wandering the known universe with a friend (who we all call Lolly), and came across this "Less Than Pristine" fence post <slash rusted implement that's managed to get glommed onto it>-- and shot it. Once I got back home, I messed with it, and voila. Title (if it helps at all) might rightly be, "Lolly's Palooza."
Can't rightly say I had the topic in mind per se, ... (show quote)
Very cool find. I love the background treatment and the composition. This image is something I might run across but struggle to capture an engaging pov. Much to learn from you, Mr. C

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Aug 5, 2021 10:52:20   #
cbtsam Loc: Monkton, MD
 
Linda From Maine wrote:
The fragility of life. Exquisite work.


Thanks so much Linda for your kind comment.

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Aug 5, 2021 16:48:34   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
ebrunner wrote:
You nailed the feeling of hot, hazy and not very pleasant. I was wondering about the not in its prime aspect of this photo and then it hit me. This shows your town in a way that would not be embraced by the Chamber of Commerce. Makes perfect sense now. This is not our town at its best.
Erich
I was thinking of bad air quality (mostly the smoke) as the relevance to your "Less than Pristine" theme title. I should have a found a photo of a crystal-clear, blue sky location that I took previously, and shot it again during bad air, then posted side by side for a "clearer" message

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Aug 5, 2021 17:50:20   #
minniev Loc: MIssissippi
 
I found this old car and truck graveyard in a village along the coast of Maine. Rusted old vehicles and decaying houses persuade me to process more harshly and more creatively than I would ever process a landscape. I have seen others do the same. Any theories about why that is so? Are you prone to these kinds of creative interventions with decaying things?


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Aug 6, 2021 09:48:34   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
minniev wrote:
I found this old car and truck graveyard in a village along the coast of Maine. Rusted old vehicles and decaying houses persuade me to process more harshly and more creatively than I would ever process a landscape. I have seen others do the same. Any theories about why that is so? Are you prone to these kinds of creative interventions with decaying things?
Aside from my abandoned mill, I probably don't take "harsh" far enough with these subjects. For many years, Minnie, your work has been ultra-engaging and instructive.

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Aug 6, 2021 11:58:01   #
captivecookie Loc: Washington state
 
minniev wrote:
I found this old car and truck graveyard in a village along the coast of Maine. Rusted old vehicles and decaying houses persuade me to process more harshly and more creatively than I would ever process a landscape. I have seen others do the same. Any theories about why that is so? Are you prone to these kinds of creative interventions with decaying things?


Absolutely love this work of art. I fully encourage grunge techniques as a method to show the beauty seen in old things as interpreted by the photographer.

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