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Rongnongno wrote:
I took this capture in 2013.
Context:
WWi memorial.
This is what is left of farm that was the HQ for an Alabama division that was decimated in the fields surrounding the area. Over 15,000 soldiers died, both Allied and German.
Leave the car as it has a 'hidden value'. It was driven by a family member of a person who died not far from here.
Tech data:
D800e with a messed up 28~200mm lens
Overcast, after a rain storm
The light, from very diffused sun rays, came at an angle.
Issue, beside the messed up lens: Dust on the sensor.
Challenge:
Make the farm stand out.
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I took this capture in 2013. br br Context: br WW... (
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Howzis?
Just moved your camera more to the right....
Dave
Uuglypher wrote:
Howzis?
Just moved your camera more to the right....
Dave
Interesting.
It makes me feel that I was lazy for not using my feet!!!
Rongnongno wrote:
And you are very close to what I had in mind.
Cooled down the general tone, desaturated and cropped grass, emphasized variation in grass, lightened background field... and now I've looked at it too long and have lost reference to blues and contrasts and relationships..
fuminous wrote:
.../...and now I've looked at it too long and have lost reference to blues and contrasts and relationships..
One strong suggestion when post processing...
Stop. Do something else and then return. This way, with your eyes and mind rested you can notice where you over process or under process.
This is not a comment on your offering but a 'workflow' idea. I use that more often than not.
Another thing I do, perhaps wrongly... I create a mask that shows a before and after at the same time so I know where I was and where I am going... This helps me when I really do not want to go overboard on anything.
Rongnongno wrote:
One strong suggestion when post processing...
Stop. Do something else and then return. This way, with your eyes and mind rested you can notice where you over process or under process.
This is not a comment on your offering but a 'workflow' idea. I use that more often than not.
Another thing I do, perhaps wrongly... I create a mask that shows a before and after at the same time so I know where I was and where I am going... This helps me when I really do not want to go overboard on anything.
One strong suggestion when post processing... br ... (
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Yes - that is why I like to use layers - you can switch them on and off, e.g. sharpen with a USM layer, then sharpen with a High Pass layer, then sharpen with a Clarity layer. I compare them using PhotoFiltre side by side. On occasion I will use more than one together.
Uuglypher wrote:
Howzis?
Just moved your camera more to the right....
Dave
In response to a couple of PMs, “the camera was moved to the right” in order to get part of the generally uninteresting wall into the foreground by contriving the compositional scant linear perspective so as to increase the proximity (decrease the distance) of the vanishing point.
Dave
Uuglypher wrote:
In response to a couple of PMs, “the camera was moved to the right” in order to get part of the generally uninteresting wall into the foreground by contriving the compositional scant linear perspective so as to increase the proximity (decrease the distance) of the vanishing point.
Dave
Basically, in PS CC, for those who need more information use perspective correction.
There are several methods under Edit->Transform->(Perspective) or whatever suits your fancy.
Quick sample from a different capture...
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Rongnongno wrote:
Basically, in PS CC, for those who need more information use perspective correction.
There are several methods under Edit->Transform->(Perspective) or whatever suits your fancy.
PS Elements also has several similar tools, just not quite as "easy" on multiple issues (such as window frames on a leaning building).
Rongnongno wrote:
Basically, in PS CC, for those who need more information use perspective correction.
There are several methods under Edit->Transform->(Perspective) or whatever suits your fancy.
Quick sample from a different capture...
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Yes, indeed; but an extra five seconds for a more proportionately realistic effect is always worth it!
Dave
You asked > "How would you change this poor capture into something of some interest?"
It seems to me that basically you had a change in the weather in mind or perhaps you meant "... something more dramatic".
I don't think the buildings are particularly interesting unless perhaps I knew what I was looking at and also knew the history. I think that even knowing the story does not improve the photo, it just makes me a better informed viewer. Your work on the photo did add some drama and as you initially wrote and I agree, it's a poor capture.
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