Great series LA Shooter. It goes to show grain used properly is great. So is the model. Very cute young lady.
1. I think she is drop dead gorgeous, but beyond that her facial expression is tantalizing to say the least. Her expression is relaxed, yet pensive a little shy, and submissive with a dangerous aspect.
2. Background- Color choice is superb and provides great contrast allowing the model to be the forward object. It is friendly and casual with a bit of class thrown in for good measure.
3. Props- Love the stark white bathrobe with the crimson initial or logo..provides contrast and objectivity to the final portrait and allows a depth of the image overall.
4. Critiques - Being a fan of tan lines, you can see that she has them although they are faint in the final render. If this was manipulated to tone them down because that is your style then okay. If they are faint because she sometimes sunbathes in the nude then there may not have been much you could do about them. If they were stark as her expression makes me believe they were, then they should have been left alone. (Personal feeling here.. Stark tan lines say to me that the photo is now almost personal...that she covers up everywhere in public, yet chose to reveal them to the photographer and the receiver, almost as a special gift.)
5. Overall I love it a lot!
The second shot is very nice. I prefer the real pics to the artistic filters.
DickC
Loc: NE Washington state
I like the first one best, great treatment, thanks!!
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