Shoeshine time
Mar 28, 2018 15:52:21 #
Whuff wrote:
Thank you to everyone for the feedback. Here's another version that presents the foreground a bit more in focus. Does this one work better?
Walt
Walt
The depth of field is certainly better in this second image. I believe I like the composition better in the first.
Mar 28, 2018 16:01:08 #
Enjoyable shots, emotionally and technically. I like the first one much better, because the composition has a strong focal point, with the composition still leading the eye in and out and around through spotting of color and directional imaginary lines. It also has a good overview of the wear of the shoes, whereas just the back does not.
Not an out of the box still life, its creativity is refreshing.
Not an out of the box still life, its creativity is refreshing.
Mar 28, 2018 16:17:36 #
Mar 28, 2018 21:16:28 #
I still like #1 best. It tells a story. #2 is more of a commercial for Shoe Polish.
Don
Don
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