2nd round of engagement shoot
May 10, 2012 16:31:45 #
May 10, 2012 16:32:30 #
gerhel wrote:
Great work, like your improvements, like you said; dont bother with #3, it was just my opinon, its still a great shot
Thanks!
May 10, 2012 19:49:40 #
djw60 wrote:
quote=PatrickTheCop quote=djw60 I think they are... (show quote)
Pat, here is the crop that I was thinking of.
It's a nice photo, no matter what you do!
:thumbup:
May 11, 2012 00:12:50 #
OK I recropped after your suggestion and liked it a little better than the first crop I did on her. I see you took out even more on the right (the grass) and I find it now does look appealing with your crop. Thanks! I think that right side was what was bothering me before, very nice job and thanks again!
May 11, 2012 07:16:44 #
PatrickTheCop wrote:
OK I recropped after your suggestion and liked it a little better than the first crop I did on her. I see you took out even more on the right (the grass) and I find it now does look appealing with your crop. Thanks! I think that right side was what was bothering me before, very nice job and thanks again!
Of course you could always do it both ways. Just make a copy of the original and do the cropping on the copy.
That way they have their choice between the two.
Have a great day!
:D
May 11, 2012 07:23:02 #
I think these are better (lighting wise) but I do have a question.
Does it seem like none of these are sharp where they need to be (eyes, faces etc.)?
Also (and this is a preference for me) putting people right up against things just doesn't work; isolating them a bit more is more pleasing to me (Like #3 and #4)but that's just a preference.
Also when isolating; i'd also prefer a bit more blur...but again...that's probably just me.
My main critique is the focus...they seem soft.
Does it seem like none of these are sharp where they need to be (eyes, faces etc.)?
Also (and this is a preference for me) putting people right up against things just doesn't work; isolating them a bit more is more pleasing to me (Like #3 and #4)but that's just a preference.
Also when isolating; i'd also prefer a bit more blur...but again...that's probably just me.
My main critique is the focus...they seem soft.
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