Here is the story. Apples!
I think you did a wonderful job in telling the story!! I did however crop your pic and edit the lighting to show you how you could have improved your shot by taking away some of the things that should have been excluded to bring focus to your subject(s).
lindann wrote:
Here is the story. Apples!
Thank you I really am new at this. Only had the camera for about a week and not too much time to pratice.
Oh my gosh I can't believe I even posted them. I feel I am really not good enough to post. Thank you for saying that.
lindann wrote:
Oh my gosh I can't believe I even posted them. I feel I am really not good enough to post. Thank you for saying that.
Let me put you at ease. There is no reason not to post. We are all here in the same boat. Some might be on the upper deck because they have more experience. But, don't worry about that, they'll be the first to lend a hand. Post away. With regard to your post here, you said what you were doing and I believe that was what we were viewing; a story versus any technical aspects. Of course, just an opinion. Enjoy!
lindann~ Don't ever feel your photos are not good enough to post!!!!!!
We all have to start somewhere, and I myself started out new a few years ago doing photography and(I still have so much to learn myself)!! I am only sharing with you some of the things that I have learned from an awesome photographer friend of mine.
I have been looking at forums for two years on photography and I thought that most people were just crabby to most others. Here I find that not to be true at all. I love this forum. I have poured every picture (mostly bed and breakfast) and forums I could find and finally bought my camera last week. My daughters really got tired of my over thinking iit and said just do it mom. So here I am.
I am sorry I am repeating myself but I want to be able to take awesome pictures of my bed and breakfast then my friends bed and breakfasts. That is my true passion.
I will post here where I feel safe. I want honesty so I am not asking for people to be soft on my photos. I feel that I will learn from all of you. Thank you all.
presentation has such a big role in creating subject interest. a great photograph fails with a poor presentation...
How can I make the technical aspects better. I am here to learn.
Awesome! These are good clean well lit, well exposed, well focused snapshots. Nothing wrong with that. Good job! :)
Ideas for more pictures - in #1, keep snapping until he grabs an apple & tries to pick it ! Digital images are cheap ! Getting closer is good advice. For #2 - if he was looking down into the basket, to see where to put the apple? Yeah ! One thing that's neat - fill the boy's laps with apples in the wagon - implies a bumper crop ! Thanks for the story - can you get it all in one pic ? THAT would be a great composition !!!
blueeyes3515 wrote:
I think you did a wonderful job in telling the story!! I did however crop your pic and edit the lighting to show you how you could have improved your shot by taking away some of the things that should have been excluded to bring focus to your subject(s).
lindann wrote:
Here is the story. Apples!
blueeyes-I think you did a magnificent job of adding brightness and clarity to an already wonderful photo. I would like to know the process you used to do this.Thanks!
Billie, You are right, it was already a wonderful photo!! And all I did was go to Photoshop CS5 and go to -->image, --> adjustmnets and levels, I also cropped.
billie wrote:
blueeyes3515 wrote:
I think you did a wonderful job in telling the story!! I did however crop your pic and edit the lighting to show you how you could have improved your shot by taking away some of the things that should have been excluded to bring focus to your subject(s).
lindann wrote:
Here is the story. Apples!
blueeyes-I think you did a magnificent job of adding brightness and clarity to an already wonderful photo. I would like to know the process you used to do this.Thanks!
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I love the second photo. Too bad the basket had plastic inside of it. The plastic is a little distracting. Otherwise a really cute shot.
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