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Nov 14, 2013 19:59:44   #
St3v3M Loc: 35,000 feet
 
trc wrote:
Most certainly - you're free to do whatever you want to change it and make it better and more acceptable. As I just told lighthouse, perhaps it isn't salvageable and the image should just be scrapped. Worse things have certainly happened to me through my many years of existence! :)

As for your changes, I think I honestly like the vertical crop the best with the wide crop coming in second and wide crop 2 third. The B&W just doesn't do much for me and comes in last; all by itself! However, all cause me 'great sorrow' since I seemed to have lost some aspects of the original that drew me into the photo to begin with - Hah!

I sure do appreciate you taking the time, St3v3M, to edit and send your works of art. They give me several different perspectives to look at and keep in mind. Hopefully you had a lot of fun and enjoyment - honestly - and it broke up this latter part of the day for you. It really can be fun to play around with images that aren't your own. It's a great time for experimentation. I know, because I like to do that to enhance my PP'ing skills, learn, and see what interesting productions I can end up with. :)

Thanks again. If you have any other thoughts or versions, let me know and feel free to post. :thumbup:

Tom
Most certainly - you're free to do whatever you wa... (show quote)

Wide angle and landscape shots are interesting as there are so many variations to choose from within each. The problem is that we typically become too emotionally attached to them to look at them in another view. It can be fun finding hidden details. Thank you again!

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Nov 14, 2013 20:10:10   #
trc Loc: Logan, OH
 
dooragdragon wrote:
I disagree with you here, your not looking at the image in the right way.


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Very nice shot there, once downloaded and then click to enlarge it give a far better look and shows much more detail.
I think withe the enlarged version it looks fantastic, the other 2 versions do not do it justice. Download the image, then left click on it to enlarge and just look at all the details you are missing .
Pete


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Clicking the download image and then left clicking on the image presents it in a much larger form and 1 can scroll up down and across to see all the details actually in the photo and bring it into a much better perspective to me.
Pete


Pete,

Thanks for the compliment. There is a lot to see, in my opinion, which is what made me like it even more after pressing the shutter release button and seeing it on my 27" monitor.

lighthouse and St3v3M do have some good points. Unfortunately I only have so much to work with in this SE Ohio shot, and I really do like the sun and clouds in this photo. :) There really is a lot going on in this photo photographically, artistically, and aesthetically. Too bad there isn't a way to retake the shot and make it all better. :) I appreciate your response.

Out of curiosity, in all seriousness, what is the 'right way' to look at this image? What do you mean by that statement? Thank you, Pete.

Tom

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Nov 14, 2013 20:19:01   #
dooragdragon Loc: Alma , Arkansas
 
I looked at it on a 26 inch monitor too.
First I downloaded the image, then left clicked on it which made the image to large to see on the screen so 1 hand to scroll left or right up or down to see the entire image which in turn gave you a better look at the photo and every detail it had .
It sounds complicated but really it's very simple .

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Nov 14, 2013 20:51:58   #
Country's Mama Loc: Michigan
 
St3v3M wrote:
Since you invited me I thought I would have fun with it.


This crop is an improvement on the original. Now my eye can see where the road is leading. It seems to be more about the journey than the road.

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Nov 14, 2013 20:54:22   #
St3v3M Loc: 35,000 feet
 
Country's Mama wrote:
This crop is an improvement on the original. Now my eye can see where the road is leading. It seems to be more about the journey than the road.

Sometimes I get so caught up in the moment I forget to see the details in front of me. Smell the roses, always smell the roses!

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Nov 14, 2013 21:12:49   #
lighthouse Loc: No Fixed Abode
 
trc wrote:
Pete,
......Out of curiosity, in all seriousness, what is the 'right way' to look at this image? What do you mean by that statement? Thank you, Pete.

Tom


What i meant about you looking at it the wrong ways is -I don't think it is a throwaway beyond salvation at all.
It has many possibilities as your crops and doorags crops show.
BUT most of all, if you like it how it is, it matters not much at all what I think of it. It is your image, it is you that has to be ultimately pleased with it, and if you are, then thats the main thing.

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Nov 14, 2013 22:03:45   #
trc Loc: Logan, OH
 
lighthouse wrote:
What i meant about you looking at it the wrong ways is -I don't think it is a throwaway beyond salvation at all.
It has many possibilities as your crops and doorags crops show.
BUT most of all, if you like it how it is, it matters not much at all what I think of it. It is your image, it is you that has to be ultimately pleased with it, and if you are, then thats the main thing.


lighthouse (and St3v3M as well),

Ahhhhhh, so that is what you meant . . . yes, I agree, it really only matters how I perceive it. If it pleases me, or the original photographer, then that is what really counts since it isn't going to the Guggenheim Museum or whatever! Yes, I suppose this is true, but I would like to have a photograph that is correct in every way that pleases most everyone with all the T's crossed and the i's dotted, if you understand what I am saying. Then again, who is, or what organization or photo governing power is the master of all images? Is there one, and is there an optimum entity that rules above all when judging photos? I am not going philosophical on you here! I am not being facetious or a smart aleck, by any means. I've been around the block too many times. Here again, just a question of curiosity? Thanks again.

Well, I have to rise at 4:00 am, so I am headed for bed. It seems as though 4:00 am gets here earlier and earlier and earlier. :) Therefore, if and when you reply, I will answer tomorrow - I have to hit the hay and get my beauty sleep - Hah! Seriously, thank you very much for all the information you provided. :)

Best Regards,
Tom :thumbup:

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Nov 15, 2013 00:06:18   #
Bushpilot Loc: Minnesota
 
St3v3M wrote:
Since you invited me I thought I would have fun with it.


I much prefer the vertical crop, in the original there is just too much empty highway in the foreground. I'd even consider cropping the whole lower part of the image maybe up to the far tip of guard rail on the RH side, the main interest, at least for me, in this image is the distant hills, the tree line, and the sky.

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Nov 15, 2013 00:09:46   #
St3v3M Loc: 35,000 feet
 
Bushpilot wrote:
I much prefer the vertical crop, in the original there is just too much empty highway in the foreground. I'd even consider cropping the whole lower part of the image maybe up to the far tip of guard rail on the RH side, the main interest, at least for me, in this image is the distant hills, the tree line, and the sky.

The image is open for rework. Download it and play with it. There are so many angles and perspectives to choose from.

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Nov 15, 2013 05:38:06   #
trc Loc: Logan, OH
 
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I much prefer the vertical crop, in the original there is just too much empty highway in the foreground. I'd even consider cropping the whole lower part of the image maybe up to the far tip of guard rail on the RH side, the main interest, at least for me, in this image is the distant hills, the tree line, and the sky.


St3v3M wrote:
The image is open for rework. Download it and play with it. There are so many angles and perspectives to choose from.


Good Morning St3v3M & Bushpilot,

I believe, if nothing else, I have provided an excellent image for people to play around with, experiment with, get their creative juices flowing, and for all of us to learn. It is a teachable moment!&#128515;

I guess altering my image in this case is like Photoshop & creating Layers or using LR for image editing - it's a nondestructive opportunity! Have some fun everyone.

Sincerely,
Tom

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Nov 15, 2013 09:46:12   #
Bloke Loc: Waynesboro, Pennsylvania
 
St3v3M wrote:
Since you invited me I thought I would have fun with it.


I actually like the original, although the vertical crop looks good too. I think being 'zoomed in' that bit more, or looking fullsize at the original, the cars on the road add a lot of interest to the image.

My only niggle is that ugly dark mark on the shoulder of the road, where someone seems to have lost his oil or something. I would have taken that out, personally.

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Nov 15, 2013 10:02:54   #
Uuglypher Loc: South Dakota (East River)
 
trc wrote:
Hi Everyone,

I contemplated posting this for about a week, but finally decided to see what all of you have to say critiquing this image. I hope it gets posted since it is 31.5 MB.

I had to run an errand and knew I was running out of time to take this shot, so I headed out one early morning to try to catch the sun correctly. When I arrived, it was completely grey and overcast - bummer! I drove right on by another 40 miles and ran several errands. On my way back, the sun was slightly shining, so after finishing at my last stop, I went out of my way to arrive at this spot again. I got out of my car standing along the busy highway (speed limit is 70 mph), put on my blinkers, and stood in front of my car along the guard rail being blown every time a semi drove by! I snapped a few shots, and then saw the sun about to be at an optimum place in the clouds. I waited, and when I thought it was just about right, I pressed the shutter release button and this is what I ended up with.

I feel like it has a lot of varying quality features all in the same image. The way I included the sun star, some minor sun flare, the disappearing perspective of the highway initially being initiated by the guard rail and the rumble strip, the slow curvature of the road disappearing into the gap of the hills, the late fall and almost disappearing color of the leaves (just enough for color), the sun lighting the golden field to the left and counter balanced by the bright yellow tree(s) to the far distant right, the well lit guard rail on the front side and the dark shadow directly behind it (good contrast), the alternating light and dark vegetation, and the nice definition of the clouds amongst the light to dark deep blue sky from left to right. :) I just think it kind of all comes together and the area of the picture is really quite large, on a fairly mild downward slope which the wide angle lens has captured.

Taken with a Nikon D800, 14-24mm f/2.8 lens, 15 mm, ISO 200, f/16, 1/640 sec, no flash, white balance = Shade, and spot metering (forgot to change it before taking the shot). Post processed some in ACR and Photoshop CC. Maybe just a tad in LR 5.2 - not sure. This image was not cropped at all.

OK, fellow photographers, have at it! Thanks ahead of time for all your thoughts, praises, constructive criticisms, and helpful suggestions. They are really appreciated. :)

Sincerely,
Tom
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"the Call of the Open Road" incarnate! And isn't it delightful when the excellent leading lines of perspective are so nicely complemented even by cooperative lines of the clouds?
And thanks for describing so well the circumstances of this capture. it draws us each so much more into the experience than merely..." Whap! here 'tis! C&C please!" .... which, of course, is perfectly justified, the image needing to hang on its own merits 'n'all...but it does help gives us all more of a sense of community with the artist.

Dave in SD

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Nov 18, 2013 11:30:49   #
Dan5000 Loc: New Hampshire
 
I like the shot. I think the sky and the distant hills are points of interest. I would crop out some of the fore ground. Other than the leading lines, the highway does not provide a lot of interest.

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