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Nov 10, 2013 09:12:17   #
dave sproul Loc: Tucson AZ
 
BrentHarder wrote:
I am submitting this pole fence photo for everyone to critique.
Go ahead, rip it apart, shread it, but be honest! lol


I believe it would make a better photo to crop out the out of focus fence line on the right, remove the "blob", and the blue on the other side of the fence on the left.

I like the subject and treatment.

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Nov 10, 2013 15:18:56   #
BrentHarder Loc: Southern California
 
Heirloom Tomato wrote:
Bob got the blob! :P


Funny Heirloom Tomato!!!

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Nov 10, 2013 17:03:50   #
lighthouse Loc: No Fixed Abode
 
BrentHarder wrote:
I am submitting this pole fence photo for everyone to critique.
Go ahead, rip it apart, shread it, but be honest! lol


The blur at centre front kills the shot.
The texture post work makes sure of the kill.
Why the heck do you want to start putting those squiggly lines in your photos???
What possible purpose could it serve?
It doesn't enhance or improve in any way.
Yeh sure its different.
It proves you can press a preset button in your software.

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Nov 10, 2013 17:11:33   #
Bloke Loc: Waynesboro, Pennsylvania
 
fstop22 wrote:
The big out of focus glob in the middle bottom kills any chance of of my eyes even reaching the fence


Yeah, that was my first reaction too...

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Nov 11, 2013 00:38:48   #
BrentHarder Loc: Southern California
 
dave sproul wrote:
I believe it would make a better photo to crop out the out of focus fence line on the right, remove the "blob", and the blue on the other side of the fence on the left.

I like the subject and treatment.


Thanks dave sproul for the recomendations for fixing this photo up. You have some good ideas here.

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Nov 11, 2013 00:39:28   #
BrentHarder Loc: Southern California
 
Bloke wrote:
Yeah, that was my first reaction too...


Bloke, you are in the majority on this thread. Thanks for your thoughts!

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