The pole fence
Nov 9, 2013 15:14:32 #
I am submitting this pole fence photo for everyone to critique.
Go ahead, rip it apart, shread it, but be honest! lol
Go ahead, rip it apart, shread it, but be honest! lol
Nov 9, 2013 15:19:21 #
The big out of focus glob in the middle bottom kills any chance of of my eyes even reaching the fence
BrentHarder wrote:
I am submitting this pole fence photo for everyone to critique.
Go ahead, rip it apart, shread it, but be honest! lol
Go ahead, rip it apart, shread it, but be honest! lol
Nov 9, 2013 15:21:29 #
fstop22 wrote:
The big out of focus glob in the middle bottom kills any chance of of my eyes even reaching the fence
Good point.......thanks.....now that you mentioned it, I bothers me too! It's an out of focus plant.
Nov 9, 2013 15:58:26 #
BrentHarder wrote:
I am submitting this pole fence photo for everyone to critique.
Go ahead, rip it apart, shread it, but be honest! lol
Go ahead, rip it apart, shread it, but be honest! lol
Hi Brent. The OOF blob really bothers me too and I don't know how to get rid of it. While I usually like the texture you are using here, it didn't seem to go far enough in this one. I am submitting a version that adds little black lines for more emphasis. I tried brightening the colors but that made it look cheesy, so I quickly abandoned that idea. Anyway, here's another version to look at. Maybe you could add something on top from another photo to kill the blob.
Nov 9, 2013 16:01:07 #
BrentHarder wrote:
I am submitting this pole fence photo for everyone to critique.
Go ahead, rip it apart, shread it, but be honest! lol
Go ahead, rip it apart, shread it, but be honest! lol
:mrgreen: OKAY! I HONESTLY HATE IT! :mrgreen: NO, seriously I like it, as in I lingered (!) so it must have possibilities (!) but the first thing in my pointy head is "no clear center of interest." I love the color, and I reaaaallly love the texturecool!but my eye keeps wondering where to light. Not sure what to do about it. If I had made it I would like it but I would keep wondering quite why? :|
Nov 9, 2013 16:07:25 #
The fact that the posts don't all share the same color tone, detail and height is what makes the photo interesting. A play between repetition and variation.
Nov 9, 2013 18:40:48 #
blob, noise, possibly taken from the wrong place. (it ain't running anywhere so you could walk around and get a better composition)
repetition and variation BUT...you lost it in the right half.
Go do it again....less ISO, more ISO, play with aperture, try different white balances, try monochrome/sepia. get a feel and then show what you feel. then pp and see what takes your fancy. THEN post....
repetition and variation BUT...you lost it in the right half.
Go do it again....less ISO, more ISO, play with aperture, try different white balances, try monochrome/sepia. get a feel and then show what you feel. then pp and see what takes your fancy. THEN post....
Nov 9, 2013 18:52:03 #
Rudimentary attempt at removing "blurred blob"
Variation on the Pole fence
Nov 9, 2013 18:55:01 #
Bob Yankle wrote:
Rudimentary attempt at removing "blurred blob"
Not too shabby, Bob. You are a pretty good ghost buster, er, I mean blurred blob remover.
Nov 9, 2013 19:06:15 #
Heirloom Tomato wrote:
Not too shabby, Bob. You are a pretty good ghost buster, er, I mean blurred blob remover.
The only one that still looks out of place is the center, orangish looking background. It's still off at the base.
Nov 9, 2013 20:07:24 #
Heirloom Tomato wrote:
Hi Brent. The OOF blob really bothers me too and I don't know how to get rid of it. While I usually like the texture you are using here, it didn't seem to go far enough in this one. I am submitting a version that adds little black lines for more emphasis. I tried brightening the colors but that made it look cheesy, so I quickly abandoned that idea. Anyway, here's another version to look at. Maybe you could add something on top from another photo to kill the blob.
Thanks Heirloom Tomato....I think Bob did it justice with his tampering of the blob.
Nov 9, 2013 22:12:28 #
Chuck_893 wrote:
:mrgreen: OKAY! I HONESTLY HATE IT! :mrgreen: NO, seriously I like it, as in I lingered (!) so it must have possibilities (!) but the first thing in my pointy head is "no clear center of interest." I love the color, and I reaaaallly love the texturecool!but my eye keeps wondering where to light. Not sure what to do about it. If I had made it I would like it but I would keep wondering quite why? :|
Chuck, you are cracking me up once again! hahahaaa! Thanks for your input.
Nov 9, 2013 22:13:45 #
rook2c4 wrote:
The fact that the posts don't all share the same color tone, detail and height is what makes the photo interesting. A play between repetition and variation.
Thanks rook for your insightful perceptions on this image. You have quite a vison for detail and it shows!
Nov 9, 2013 22:16:39 #
BrentHarder wrote:
Thanks Heirloom Tomato....I think Bob did it justice with his tampering of the blob.
Bob got the blob! :P
Nov 10, 2013 01:44:59 #
Bob Yankle wrote:
The only one that still looks out of place is the center, orangish looking background. It's still off at the base.
I like it.....good job Bob! Thanks!
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