artBob wrote:
It is fine as it is. The suggestions from others also "work," but convey a different expression. Yours is a fine balance between real and surreal, giving off a kind of soft melancholy for me. Objectively and formally, yours is a low-key creation, likely to create moodiness.
Thanks artBob! I do think it needs a little tweaking here and there, especially with the temp, but i also think B&W is extremely subjective . . . maybe more than color. Thanks again for your kind words! I may put this one to bed for a while.