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Feb 18, 2014 06:04:28   #
ArgusSnap1 Loc: Indiana
 
Hi--nice shots! I like the b/w cropped version of #1. The second one of the catch and umpire might be better in b/w also. One thing that is very good about b/w has do do with reducing the distraction of unwanted areas. That works so well in the cropped 1st example. Ido like the incrase in contrast also. Try the 3rd photo in b/w and see if it is easier to focus on the players(Ump or no Ump.) They are very good subject matter and I like that they are story images also. The 1st one with the caption really kicks b__!

Thanks for posting and your are doing great.

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Feb 18, 2014 06:51:33   #
infocus Loc: Australia
 
Pine1 wrote:
Lay it on me. The only way I can learn. I have thick skin and no talent. This is my first effort.


Nothing wrong with those grand dad. Love shines. :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup:

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Feb 18, 2014 07:58:42   #
Picdude Loc: Ohio
 
Pine1,
Great post. I think all the versions of your B&W's came out fine, although the cropped version does seem to work best.

The cropped version of "Safe!" really made that picture as the "Ball-In-Flight" was completely lost (at least to me) before the crop. Once the ball was introduced, the story made perfect sense. That was a really fantastic capture by the way. Nice timing. :)

As a side note, when shooting sports like baseball, you may want to look at shooting some shots in burst mode (i.e. the camera takes 3 or more captures at a time when the shutter is depressed). This can help you consistently catch elusive timing shots where multiple subjects are moving simultaneously. Should be no problem with your D7100.

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Feb 18, 2014 08:17:56   #
Chuy Loc: OUT OF TOWN
 
You nailed it with the crops. :thumbup:

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Feb 18, 2014 08:25:27   #
jwt Loc: Texas Hill Country
 
Pine1 wrote:
Lay it on me. The only way I can learn. I have thick skin and no talent. This is my first effort.


Very nice, I like the color shot of the boys over the B&W. Thanks for sharing.

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Feb 18, 2014 08:26:19   #
Marilyng Loc: Lorain,Oh.
 
Pine1 wrote:
Lay it on me. The only way I can learn. I have thick skin and no talent. This is my first effort.


I agree,all great photos but love the b/w,well done! :thumbup:

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Feb 18, 2014 10:10:54   #
ebbote Loc: Hockley, Texas
 
And a great first effort it is Pine.

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Feb 18, 2014 10:39:06   #
Pine1 Loc: Midland & Lakeway
 
Thank you again.

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Feb 18, 2014 11:53:27   #
photogrl57 Loc: Tennessee
 
Nice shots. Maybe think about lowering the camera a bit next time so you get more of the subject and less of the background.

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Feb 18, 2014 12:28:45   #
Meives Loc: FORT LAUDERDALE
 
[quote=Pine1]Both #1 B & W and #2 color are good. I think I would have cropped in a bit closer. If you want real advise, post and click on "store original". A better download and camera data will allow expert advise. David PS After you post you can go back and add titles which makes it more clear when discussing.

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Feb 18, 2014 15:29:11   #
speters Loc: Grangeville/Idaho
 
Beautiful set, at first I wasn't sure what I was looking at, it looked almost like a miniature set initially. Good job, both versions!!!

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Feb 18, 2014 16:59:44   #
Meives Loc: FORT LAUDERDALE
 
Pine1 wrote:
Thanks for the feedback.


The zoomed in cropped picture is much better for me. David

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Feb 18, 2014 17:11:03   #
OriginalCyn Loc: Connecticut
 
Great shots for first time in public or not! You've heard all the suggestions…lower the camera to reduce unwanted space, up the contrast, lighten the faces…it could go on and on forever! The more images you take, the better your odds. But as you get better, you'll not need to take as many in order to get such good results. I loved how you eventually cropped the first one. All 3 boys are important to the image…and it tells a wonderful story. But if you were so inclined, you could take it one step further. If it is tack sharp, you could crop the boy on the left out, and get a really intense photo of the other two. I love the mouth hanging open of the center boy. I might even lighten the face of the middle boy ever so slightly. If you post it again and click on the box "store original" then I could show you what I mean. Super job!!

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Feb 18, 2014 18:45:24   #
erbiv Loc: Ellijay, GA ...retired from Anchorage, AK
 
I love the B&W! The last one not so much although I am not sure why, perhaps the clutter in the background distracts from the subject. A little tighter framing may have helped as well.

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Feb 18, 2014 19:14:21   #
raymondh Loc: Walker, MI
 
I like the 1st 2 shots. You captured the "other" part of the game that I find interesting. :thumbup:

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