One more Art Attempt
Jun 15, 2017 15:16:32 #
Kuzano wrote:
Color simply confuses photography.
Sometimes that is true. I like color photography, though.
Jun 15, 2017 15:28:32 #
Jun 15, 2017 16:26:34 #
It's nice as it is. Personally, I'd take some of the "stuff" out of the water--not all--and move the duck a little to the left, but that's just me. Good job here.
Jun 15, 2017 16:35:00 #
international architect wrote:
too soft
I find that to be part of the appeal. But I thank you for your opinion.
Jun 15, 2017 16:36:57 #
jaymatt wrote:
It's nice as it is. Personally, I'd take some of the "stuff" out of the water--not all--and move the duck a little to the left, but that's just me. Good job here.
I did not move the bird because I want to preserve the wake behind him.
Jun 15, 2017 17:59:54 #
It's nice, but the subject is too centered for my liking. If the subject were framed just a bit to the left, so the duck is swimming towards the center of the photo, that would visually be more attractive. Coupled with that, if the duck were moved just slightly towards the bottom of the image, again for composition purposes, that would also improve the photo.
--Bob
--Bob
kpmac wrote:
Okay, I don't plan on making this a habit, but I WOULD like to know what you think.
Jun 15, 2017 19:15:42 #
rmalarz wrote:
It's nice, but the subject is too centered for my liking. If the subject were framed just a bit to the left, so the duck is swimming towards the center of the photo, that would visually be more attractive. Coupled with that, if the duck were moved just slightly towards the bottom of the image, again for composition purposes, that would also improve the photo.
--Bob
--Bob
I left the bird higher in the photo to preserve the reflection and as stated I left the bird forward to preserve the wake. But I do see your point. The original image maybe could have been better composed.
Jun 16, 2017 01:52:46 #
kpmac wrote:
I did not move the bird because I want to preserve the wake behind him.
I understand that--I didn't mean to move him in the photo; I meant to recompose photo before you took it. That way, the wake would still be behind him.
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