One more Art Attempt
Jun 15, 2017 10:42:32 #
Nalu wrote:
I like it a lot. Just a couple of comments. The birds eye is right smack dab in the middle of the photo. Did you try moving the bird to the left a little. Also, it looks like you put a white vignette around the parameter. I'm going back and forth on that. The stuff on the water, I would only deal with the stuff coming out of the birds head and leave the rest. Nice work.
I did not try to move the bird, but that might work. I did remove the stuff on the water. The white vignette was added.
Jun 15, 2017 10:43:13 #
donrosshill wrote:
I happen to like these type of Art interpretations.
Don
Don
Thank you, Don.
Jun 15, 2017 10:44:12 #
Meives wrote:
I would like to see the bird more to the left to use the rulevof thirds. The bird is then facing into the picture. But then you would need a bush or item to balance it, David
I am not sure about moving the bird. Thanks for the comment.
Jun 15, 2017 10:45:14 #
moonhawk wrote:
I like the stuff in the water. The duck floating alone in an empty space would be a lot less interesting.
Nice shot.
Nice shot.
Thanks for the comment. Just goes to show that we all have different likes and dislikes.
Jun 15, 2017 10:48:16 #
This is the repost without the "stuff" behind the bird's head. What do you think?
Jun 15, 2017 11:07:46 #
kpmac wrote:
This is the repost without the "stuff" behind the bird's head. What do you think?
What do you think? I think it makes a great capture even better ...
Jun 15, 2017 11:20:56 #
truckster wrote:
What do you think? I think it makes a great capture even better ...
I like it better this way, also. Thanks for the tip.
Jun 15, 2017 11:37:52 #
kpmac wrote:
Thank you, Angela. I am working to get better.
But always fun along the way!!
Jun 15, 2017 11:54:46 #
angela k wrote:
But always fun along the way!!
But always fun along the way!!
What could be better than loving to practice?
Jun 15, 2017 12:16:46 #
Jun 15, 2017 12:22:59 #
May we see your redos? I loved the first one you did and I love this one. I really think you could make money on these.
Jun 15, 2017 12:31:15 #
kpmac wrote:
Okay, I don't plan on making this a habit, but I WOULD like to know what you think.
I like it just the way it is kp. The stuff looks natural and like it should be in the scene. Good job. Do some more.
Jun 15, 2017 13:16:51 #
amyinsparta wrote:
May we see your redos? I loved the first one you did and I love this one. I really think you could make money on these.
I will post more when I feel they are worthy of posting. Thanks for the encouragement.
Jun 15, 2017 13:17:47 #
merrytexan wrote:
I like it just the way it is kp. The stuff looks natural and like it should be in the scene. Good job. Do some more.
Thanks, merry. I plan to post more of these soon.
Jun 15, 2017 14:46:26 #
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