Posts for: Sanctuary of Words Photography
Dec 21, 2017 21:53:30 #
the way we love
is magical
soft
embracing souls
entwined
ethereally dancing
upon this
moss covered stage
where infinity rules
for she is both
benevolent and just
touching
each of our shoulders
with this blade
hewn of tenderness
granting dreams
come true
is magical
soft
embracing souls
entwined
ethereally dancing
upon this
moss covered stage
where infinity rules
for she is both
benevolent and just
touching
each of our shoulders
with this blade
hewn of tenderness
granting dreams
come true
Dec 21, 2017 21:51:42 #
onetimeduck wrote:
Beautiful imagery in two media.
You are so very kind. Thank you💕
Dec 21, 2017 21:51:09 #
PH CIB wrote:
I find your concept very interesting and I think I... (show quote)
Thank you for your kindness. It DOES actually work both ways. Happy winter solstice💕
Dec 21, 2017 21:49:59 #
Indiana wrote:
As an adjunct professor of English I will give you a B+ for the poetry, and a B for the photograph. Although the photo may have some technical difficulties, I like the focal point and the curving line that draws the eye into the photo. The subject is compelling and engaging. I like the effort on both performances. Keep posting as we all learn from each other.
Thank you💕
Dec 18, 2017 13:48:48 #
Dec 18, 2017 13:45:22 #
How beautiful! Their shimmering colors never cease to amaze me. Wonderful work💕
Dec 18, 2017 09:55:02 #
PH CIB wrote:
I am really impressed with your writing and trying to match the feelings of your writing with the feelings of the individual photograph you post with it,,,would make a great book of poetry with a matching photographs,,,keep it up !!!
You have made my day with your kind words. Thank you so very much💕
Dec 18, 2017 09:54:27 #
CSand wrote:
Please don't remove. Give it another go. This is a learning site and sometimes when we are brave enough to be different we might take a bit of criticism that feels crushing. Heads up and onward with what we individually love. Consider the good advice and let the rest go. Hope you post many times in future. Sandy
Thank you for your kindness, Sandy. I will continue to try with the photography. 💕
Dec 18, 2017 09:53:07 #
DragonsLady wrote:
I think you needed to find a more deteriorated line of pylons to match the feel of your poem. Not enough time has gone by to show nature's power. Don't worry about not being able to remove the photo since it would likely remove your poem as well.
Thank you 💕
Dec 18, 2017 09:31:01 #
If these barren arms,
shivering branches outstretched,
reach for you when you’ve gone away,
you’ll say, “Hush baby,
it’s only a few heartbeats
in eternity’s scheme.”
But branches know not time,
only the sensation of trembling limbs,
leafless,
even naked
without your glorious colors.
So hurry home, my heart.
Hurry home, to dress these branches
in the warm poetry of your love.
shivering branches outstretched,
reach for you when you’ve gone away,
you’ll say, “Hush baby,
it’s only a few heartbeats
in eternity’s scheme.”
But branches know not time,
only the sensation of trembling limbs,
leafless,
even naked
without your glorious colors.
So hurry home, my heart.
Hurry home, to dress these branches
in the warm poetry of your love.
Dec 16, 2017 21:18:06 #
Absolutely amazing. I never tire of catching a glimpse of them and here you are with these fabulous shots! Wonderful💕
Dec 15, 2017 16:40:07 #
davyboy wrote:
I like the photo it goes with the mood in the poem. Did you write the poem? It is beautiful
I did write the poem. Thank you for your lovely comments. I tried to remove it, though, after a previous post when a member said that my photo distracted from the poem because of its poor quality. I appreciate you for being so kind💕
Dec 15, 2017 10:11:21 #
ediesaul wrote:
Love the poem! Can't see the image too well.
Thank you. I tried to remove the post but can’t seem to find a way to get it completely deleted.
Dec 15, 2017 09:52:20 #
rmalarz wrote:
I'm with Edie on this one. The poetry outdoes the photograph. The photograph has exposure and contrast issues which distract from the serenity of the scene.
--Bob
--Bob
Thanks for the feedback. I’ll remove it.
Dec 15, 2017 09:22:29 #
I’m in love with this trembling
that happens when I think of you
when I sit and stare
into nothingness
where everything is hidden
beyond the remains
of the grays
and purples
where there are only
heartbeats
not knees
not legs
for standing is impossible
never mind the transcendent
moonlight beneath your skin
where the poetry begins
so, deep within my soul
I’m in love with this trembling
that happens when I think of you
when I sit and stare
into nothingness
where everything is hidden
beyond the remains
of the grays
and purples
where there are only
heartbeats
not knees
not legs
for standing is impossible
never mind the transcendent
moonlight beneath your skin
where the poetry begins
so, deep within my soul
I’m in love with this trembling
