Hmmm... from my research there is more than just lighting. Yes, lighting would be the most important. What about compostion, mood, bokeh, the list goes on. I am sorry you took the time to tell me that request was not vald.
Weddingguy wrote:
"Other than lighting" is to not critique at all. Portraiture is all about lighting and other than if you were in perfect focus or not, there is nothing left on which to comment.