dragonariesphotography wrote:
http://dragon-aries-photo.com/ --- please check out my website and tell me what you think, if i should add or change something, i am new to the "buisness" point of view for my photography and am open to any help anyone is willing to give.
~You've got five different typefaces on your home page, not including the title graphic. The navigation bar is one, the little "welcome" paragraph is two, the word "Thanks" is three, and then the "Calendar of Availability" is four, and the blurb at the bottom in blue for iPage is five. Not good.
~I would move the counter down to the very bottom. No one needs to see that junk smack in the middle of the home page. Or get rid of it entirely. Page counts are simply not useful measures anymore.
~On your contact page, use a brighter color for your text. Grey on black is for Myspace 12 year olds...
~You don't need a "Photo Gallery" and a "Photo Gallery New". Just have one gallery, and put the newer photos at the top. Would a potential customer care if a sample photo is from yesterday or last year? Probably not.
~On your "Packages" page, remove the entire paragraph about not being a professional. If you find yourself having to apologize for your work, you're in the wrong profession. It's fine to say something like "Your satisfaction is guaranteed" or "We're not happy until YOU'RE happy", but don't apologize, or tell a potential customer "I only do this for spare change and to buy new equipment". That really sounds pathetic.
~Get rid of the blue, orange and purple text colors on the "Packages" page. There's a reason books and newspapers are printed in black on white.
I'm sorry if I sound like a crabby old SOB but I've designed websites since about 1990 and taught college courses in FrontPage and Dreamweaver, so I kinda know what I'm talking about. Plus, you asked. :)
If you want to be a
Professional, your site has to look like you are.
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