Posts for: Frank2013
Oct 10, 2017 12:57:45 #
dpullum wrote:
Thank you for comment dpullum....Crop to the story. Bring the right into close to the ball, Left near the player's heel and bottom to the edge of the green patch. The story is the player kicking the ball.
With trimmed focus this is a great action capture.
With trimmed focus this is a great action capture.
SoHillGuy wrote:
Thank you SoHillGuy, part of the blend of texture..You captured a great expression on the boys face. You might consider cleaning up the area of his left leg which looks like it has a lot of hair on it. I agree with dpullum's suggestion on cropping.
magnetoman wrote:
Appreciate your commenting Dave..just standing sideways.Very nicely caught Frank! And the pp is really apt. I’d crop, maybe not quite as tight as dp is suggesting. Have we lost a leg from the left hand fella?
Oct 9, 2017 19:21:21 #
Oct 9, 2017 15:18:38 #
Great composition R.G. Your mentioning of the distant hillside and the break in the clouds above that area would lend itself well to a gentle brightening of that hillside to possibly add a touch more depth should you so desire....
Oct 8, 2017 01:15:21 #
I'll be the dissenter here Erich...wonderfully composed is how I see #1, presentation not to to my particular taste. #2 I find, for lack of a better description...over processed, all personal taste on my part Erich....a lot left in the shadows makes it seem sort of lifeless for me considering all the action protrayed...
Oct 6, 2017 17:20:12 #
An interesting concept Erich...I'm just having a hard time with the whole image seeming oof....seems the tips bother me more than the center.
Oct 6, 2017 12:51:00 #
An engaging image Anvil…your choice of treatment serves it well, my nit piks are the dark area lower right, almost as if it’s a too strong vignette and stands out, I think lightening up that area might improve and I find the brown foliage too strong, maybe desaturate orange a bit in the HSL section,
and I'm on the fence about the bright break in the clouds in the back ground….purely personal opinions….a wall hanger in my opinion...well done.
and I'm on the fence about the bright break in the clouds in the back ground….purely personal opinions….a wall hanger in my opinion...well done.
Oct 6, 2017 10:38:41 #
An exquisite image Don, the light was managed very well and the textured background a wonderful choice along with blending the image colors into it….definitely going into the nominations for this months “Gallery Project”….
Oct 5, 2017 23:05:15 #
After reading R.G.'s thoughts, then hearing your response, I thought to dramatize both...for what its worth, my effort to combine both visions.
Oct 4, 2017 13:06:07 #
If both images had the same type vignette it might help with your decision....for me both are nice presentations of an image I would have been proud to have taken, I will note there is haloing evident at nvd...
Oct 4, 2017 10:00:54 #
Good composition, timed right, taken from a great perspective, and found with a keen eye amersfoort, I would only suggest bringing in the last couple of upper zones...
Oct 3, 2017 11:15:48 #
Don't look too close..poorly executed.
Oct 3, 2017 11:13:38 #
I like them all, well done plessner...I would have a hard time picking between one and two.....
Oct 2, 2017 22:09:49 #
Just goes to show how a great shot can turn into an excellent presentation in the right hands....your conversion of this wonderful color image is inspiring.....I only mentioned context originally because of your mention of the back story. Just outstanding talent from capture to presentation color or b/w Mr. Chinn.
Oct 2, 2017 19:51:50 #
So I been mean'n to ask, since it stands out in this version minniev...is that Graham's tent for the week just this side of the lit mountain left??
and very nicely done fuminous....
and very nicely done fuminous....
Oct 2, 2017 13:44:09 #
Just in the way for me plessner, not really framing much that I see....