Thatβs a great picture. I donβt see anything wrong with this. But I think you may need to move your light towards your back shoulder. Stand and all. Light needs to be a lot higher. If your trying to get more shadow in the eye area. There are several good videos on you tube about Rembrandt lighting.
That helps a lot...the light setting helps me too. Can I post a picture of what I am getting maybe you can help. I actually got a new cape that I am wanting to try again.