petercbrandt wrote:
Nice idea to zone in on roofs, just a suggestion: Photo#1, in f/g lower right corner, is a grey deck surrounded by beige walls, behind that a white staircase and white wall, try cropping in tighter for a graphic look. Pic#2 try a very contrasty look by making the shadows go black but keep highlight area normal. My thoughts are to simplify the images.
Peter, I think this is what you mean. I like it.