The way of the old West
Feb 28, 2019 19:58:51 #
Harvey wrote:
I like the idea for the image - BUT - the reality is missed by the mistakes - a Red Wine bottle and a Whisky shot glass - IMHO
Had to chuckle, I didn't have a whiskey bottle as I don't drink whiskey; but had a wine bottle! Must borrow one for my next still life. Believe you are the only one to notice, Harvey!
Feb 28, 2019 20:06:09 #
Jim70 wrote:
First off - if you're happy with it that's all that matters.
Having said that, I agree that the image would be better if the lighting weren't as flat and with fewer objects. I find my eye bouncing around in the image. One strong central theme might be better.
All-in-all, a pretty good effort!
Having said that, I agree that the image would be better if the lighting weren't as flat and with fewer objects. I find my eye bouncing around in the image. One strong central theme might be better.
All-in-all, a pretty good effort!
Yes, enjoyed doing this still life and like it; but with all the ideas and thoughts about this photo, I have a lot of things to work on. That's what is so great about UHH, so many great people willing to share their ideas and knowledge.
Feb 28, 2019 20:07:32 #
ELNikkor wrote:
The gun in front of the spurs, the bottle empty and knocked over.
Another good idea!
Feb 28, 2019 20:09:21 #
John from gpwmi wrote:
I like it, but know little about still-life photography. Wish we could ask this guy what he thinks.
LOL, he does look like he would know!
Feb 28, 2019 20:14:27 #
edrobinsonjr wrote:
I really like this. It captures all of the aspects of the Old West, Is well composed and very sharp and crisp.
Ed
Ed
Thanks, Ed, appreciate your comments.
Feb 28, 2019 20:23:49 #
radiomantom wrote:
Move the lantern and bottle more to the left of center and go with a black background and you have a real winner.
I think the general consensus is just what you suggested. Move the bottle and lantern and remove the window. Thanks
Mar 1, 2019 09:55:35 #
DeeAndre wrote:
Any comments on my still life would be welcome---either positive or not. Thanks.
Well done DeeAndre.
Mar 1, 2019 11:22:05 #
DeanS wrote:
Maybe also a couple shell casings for effect, along with the Aces & Eights. You’ve got a good one going here, and possibilities are numerous.
Thanks , now the question is, where do I get the shell casings? LOL I like the idea ,tho. It would fit with the total idea of the photo.
Mar 1, 2019 11:22:42 #
Mar 1, 2019 11:32:50 #
I have to agree with what others have said about losing the window, bottle and shot glass. The lantern, spurs and gun make a really nice composition by themselves. If you want to include the bottle and glass for more story telling, a different placement might be more effective. This looks like you're off to a really good start, and the image has lots of potential. The quality of the shot is very nice. Keep playing with it and have fun. 
Mar 1, 2019 11:34:04 #
PRodacy
Loc: New Mexico
Only comment I have is that the bottle with the shot glass is wrong. Its obviously a wine bottle since whiskey (which is poured into shot glasses) was never sold in green bottles. In the era you're trying to portray, whiskey was only sold in clear glass bottles. Buy a bottle of whiskey, drink about half of it, and use the rest for your still life. Being able to see the amber liquid will help balance the color composition with the flame as well.
Mar 1, 2019 11:35:56 #
PRodacy
Loc: New Mexico
DeanS wrote:
Maybe also a couple shell casings for effect, along with the Aces & Eights. You’ve got a good one going here, and possibilities are numerous.
Make sure that the casings are the correct ones for the gun.
Mar 1, 2019 11:38:39 #
PRodacy
Loc: New Mexico
I disagree with the people who don't like the window. That lightness in the background is critical. Not sure about the metal corners or whatever they are on the edges of the table. They kind of muddy up the composition.
Mar 1, 2019 14:34:21 #
stepha11
Loc: Trail British Coluimbia
I like! I also see possibly four good opportunities for great still life pictures-any of the items shown could be great shots.
As an extra comment-I remember when a lantern like that was our only light for chores-like milking cows or any night time doings outside.
As an extra comment-I remember when a lantern like that was our only light for chores-like milking cows or any night time doings outside.
Mar 1, 2019 14:36:17 #
stepha11
Loc: Trail British Coluimbia
I like!. Any one of the objects would make a great still life.
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