#s 1 and 4 are my favorites. What a great set of captures!!
I'll comment on the first image..
according to how the shadows have been adjusted, the light beams are on the wrong side of the image. Seeing how the shadows are darkest on the right, the beam should have been located on the left. Next time think about where the light source is coming from and add highlights in the correct orientation in the future.
Nice work--love the last one.
dnbjb1 wrote:
Experimentals
Definately the last one (Father Time) is my favorite. Almost looks as if it was done with an old 4 x 5 film camera.
Very nice concepts and work done on them. Watch carefully when adding to a photograph that you maintain the integrity of the ambient lighting, ref. the first one. The, obviously, added light rays contradict the ambient light and shadows. The only other suggestion is abandon your frames. I'd prefer to see the photos full size, with, perhaps, a slight border rather than sacrifice real estate with a graphic frame.
--Bob
dnbjb1 wrote:
Experimentals
Thanks for the objective critique. As an amature photographer I appreciate the sound advice on improving my skills!
Very good set. The last one is my favorite.
Great set, I love the last one.
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