wayne-03 Loc: Minnesota

what would you do different?

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SonyA580 Loc: FL in the winter & MN in the summer

For the most part I liked your images. The color, composition and focus are very good. The only objection I have is the blown out area on her forehead and the bridge and tip of her nose. If you can't change the lighting maybe a little "Photoshop" work would take care of it.

northsidejoe Loc: pittsburgh

I think you did very good Wayne thanks for showing your set-up diagram saying hello from Pittsburgh.

wayne-03 Loc: Minnesota

I tried moving the light a little but I still had the shine. She tried blotting her face with Kleenex and that helped a little. I did some research and apparently there is an oil absorbing paper pad that you can get. I will be sure to have some on hand for our next shoot.

https://www.cleanandclear.com/blotting-papers/clean-clear-oil-absorbing-sheets

CPR Loc: Nature Coast of Florida

Sometimes circumstances are such that Photoshop is the best option. The shot is great except for the forehead and tip of the nose. Time to call Dr. PS.

polonois Loc: Lancaster County,PA.

Besides the items stated above. I would make sure the background was 2 stops more than the subject and evenly lit. I see traces of it being unevenly lit near the top. Years ago when my studio was open I would place a dynalite head on either side at a 45% angle off to the side and behind the subject and meter the background everywhere and adjust the lights produce an even lighting on the whole background. I have seen this uneven background lighting on other pictures you posted. I do have to say that the sharpness you get with your subjects eyes is some of the best I've ever seen.