more from a couple of productive hoours wuth one of my great-nieces
Sep 30, 2018 23:31:10 #
Sep 30, 2018 23:51:47 #
Oct 1, 2018 06:01:10 #
I think many aspects of this shot work well. What "misses" a bit for me is her pose. Her posture/position is a bit too, rounded. I would want her to sit straighter, her head more aligned with her shoulders, etc. On the positive side, beside the obvious fact she is a beautiful girl, I love how tack sharp you got her eyes, and how they just sparkle.
Oct 1, 2018 07:01:02 #
WILLARD98407 wrote:
Lex
hoours wuth?
need a new proof-reader
hoours wuth?
need a new proof-reader
Mr Bill, beauty must run in your family. Another great model.
Greg
Oct 1, 2018 08:55:58 #
Oct 1, 2018 14:03:34 #
Transbuff1985 wrote:
Gorgeous shot, good lighting, love her eyes. Bob
Thanks. Trans.
mrbill
Oct 1, 2018 14:06:28 #
justhercamera wrote:
I think many aspects of this shot work well. What "misses" a bit for me is her pose. Her posture/position is a bit too, rounded. I would want her to sit straighter, her head more aligned with her shoulders, etc. On the positive side, beside the obvious fact she is a beautiful girl, I love how tack sharp you got her eyes, and how they just sparkle.
Thanks for the notes. she is a bit rounded and I could have fixed that in post but didn't take the time on this one. she's sitting on a rock and resting her hands on her knees, so a little humpy-backed.
thanks again for looking in on my great-nieces
mrbill
Oct 1, 2018 14:07:26 #
CLF wrote:
Mr Bill, beauty must run in your family. Another great model.
Greg
Greg
Thanx, Greg.
it is, of course, on the wife's side.
mrbill
Oct 1, 2018 14:09:43 #
Photog8 wrote:
Thnx fer the thumbs, 8.
your avatar is sorta like looking in a mirror. ( that is a horse's a--, isn't it?)
mrbill
Oct 1, 2018 16:32:57 #
WILLARD98407 wrote:
Thnx fer the thumbs, 8.
your avatar is sorta like looking in a mirror. ( that is a horse's a--, isn't it?)
mrbill
your avatar is sorta like looking in a mirror. ( that is a horse's a--, isn't it?)
mrbill
Oct 1, 2018 18:08:14 #
Nicely done Willard. I see you even got a little "catch light" in her eyes.
Don
Don
Oct 1, 2018 18:28:26 #
Eyes are "overdone" in post.
WILLARD98407 wrote:
Lex
hoours wuth?
need a new proof-reader
hoours wuth?
need a new proof-reader
Oct 1, 2018 19:33:15 #
WILLARD98407 wrote:
Lex
hoours wuth?
need a new proof-reader
hoours wuth?
need a new proof-reader
Very nice, WILLARD98407
Oct 1, 2018 19:45:50 #
PAR4DCR wrote:
Nicely done Willard. I see you even got a little "catch light" in her eyes.
Don
Don
Thanks, Par.
mrbill
Oct 2, 2018 09:12:14 #
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