--go fish
May 10, 2018 01:00:53 #
May 10, 2018 10:40:09 #
Fascinating and lovely shot. I would like to see the shadowed side contrasted more, to bring out the shapes and colors.
May 11, 2018 08:15:07 #
First ask, "what is the story" then crop to the story. What is in the photo is the "Sushi Ya"... and the cars passing by. I would crop to the window green borders making them all even. Then taking advantage of the reflection of cars in window driving by, the title could be "People in Cars Passing Great Food."
Lesson... See a story, photograph a story and then Crop to the story.... Title alerts the viewer to see your visual message.
Lesson... See a story, photograph a story and then Crop to the story.... Title alerts the viewer to see your visual message.
May 11, 2018 09:53:43 #
dpullum wrote:
First ask, "what is the story" then crop to the story. What is in the photo is the "Sushi Ya"... and the cars passing by. I would crop to the window green borders making them all even. Then taking advantage of the reflection of cars in window driving by, the title could be "People in Cars Passing Great Food."
Lesson... See a story, photograph a story and then Crop to the story.... Title alerts the viewer to see your visual message.
Lesson... See a story, photograph a story and then Crop to the story.... Title alerts the viewer to see your visual message.
What if there's no story, but rather an appreciation of the beauty in the shapes and colors?
May 12, 2018 00:19:28 #
dpullum wrote:
First ask, "what is the story" then crop to the story. What is in the photo is the "Sushi Ya"... and the cars passing by. I would crop to the window green borders making them all even. Then taking advantage of the reflection of cars in window driving by, the title could be "People in Cars Passing Great Food."
Lesson... See a story, photograph a story and then Crop to the story.... Title alerts the viewer to see your visual message.
Lesson... See a story, photograph a story and then Crop to the story.... Title alerts the viewer to see your visual message.
Thanks for your view, dpullum. I'm with artBob on this. Determining the "story" in any picture is in the eye and imagination of the beholder.
Bob
May 12, 2018 00:23:54 #
artBob wrote:
What if there's no story, but rather an appreciation of the beauty in the shapes and colors?
Thanks artbob. Thumbup, thumbup and thumbup!!!!
Bob
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