Keep trying to learn. Always looking for feedback......
Your photo is sticking. I like many things about it: the contrast in color of the subject, the mood that it projects and the composition are all wonderful
deg122 wrote:
Keep trying to learn. Always looking for feedback......
Did you try including the women's entire bodies?
When you created the image, what message did you want the viewer to get or what was your intent?
deg122 wrote:
Keep trying to learn. Always looking for feedback......
PaulG
Loc: Western Australia
Oddly cropped, to my eye.
Too much dead space and I think showing their entire bodies would have been better.
Showing all of their bodies would be nice. I liked the amount of water, cropping tight is way over emphasized on this site.
Nice concept. Agree with cropping comments. The thigh and hip highlights on the rear model need some toning down.
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