Second time on here for creative critics to learn studio shoots.
Camera Canon Mark III 5D, lens 100-200mmL 2.8. lights a single studio light on octagon diffuser with opposite silver reflector.
Benttree wrote:
Second time on here for creative critics to learn studio shoots.
Camera Canon Mark III 5D, lens 100-200mmL 2.8. lights a single studio light on octagon diffuser with opposite silver reflector.
A very lovely lady!!!
However the pose looks awkward, it might be because the camera angle makes it seem like the chair and model are tipping over. The scrunching of her right shoulder makes her look deformed. Imho The main light is just a tad harsh, but not an image killer.
Superb vintage wine. Great pose... hands well posed.
I love this. I feel the lighting was good, and I felt that she was very comfortable posing for this shot, also the smile sold me.
EdR
Loc: Gig Harbor, WA
Maybe a reflector to put a little more light on the left side of the face, and the chair angle seems awkward as noted above.
You need to work on the light as there is no catchlight in her eyes since she isn't posed to get some light in her eyes or the light isn't positioned properly. Keep working on it. Light is the most important thing. Posing it important too.
Rich2236
Loc: E. Hampstead, New Hampshire
I have to agree with mangles...But overall the shot shows imagination and good lighting.
Rich...
My eyes were drawn to her armpit...........go figure.
Manglesphoto wrote:
A very lovely lady!!!
However the pose looks awkward, it might be because the camera angle makes it seem like the chair and model are tipping over. The scrunching of her right shoulder makes her look deformed. Imho The main light is just a tad harsh, but not an image killer.
A->Good image. Demonstrates that a woman does not have to <30 to be beautiful.
B->I would like to see a little more light on the eyes--and also a catch-light. This would liven up the shot.
C->Basically good lighting except for B above.
D->Hope she didn't fall over. The angle has that feeling.
I love shooting older women, 50, 60, 70. My ex is 81 and is gorgeous. Unfortunately it is difficult to get older women to pose, even for boudoir as you have done. Good job.
The combination of that bared shoulder with that devilish grin creates a delightful and downright impish "Come hither...baby" shot of a quite attractive woman.
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