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How about another Bath?
Jul 8, 2016 15:34:42 #
The bath with Kari
Kari was freelance gaffer that decided she wanted to be the Star instead of behind the scene.
I know about the seam in the wall and the lack of a base board their showing was intentional!!
Kari was freelance gaffer that decided she wanted to be the Star instead of behind the scene.
I know about the seam in the wall and the lack of a base board their showing was intentional!!
Jul 9, 2016 07:48:24 #
Jul 9, 2016 08:38:56 #
abc1234 wrote:
The seam down the middle kills it for me.
It is distracting... in some otherwise nice photographs.
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Jul 9, 2016 09:42:03 #
Jul 9, 2016 12:28:26 #
abc1234 wrote:
The seam down the middle kills it for me.
Really shows the importance of having a good background in the image and placing the subject so it doesn't detract from viewers overall impression of the work.
Jul 10, 2016 20:38:22 #
That's an outstanding set you have with just the pitcher, basin, table, and chair. It's really ideal for B&W photographs. There's something on the left end of the table that I would remove. It's not really clear what it is. The second photo is my favorite. I would definitely take more photos at that location with her and other models. The dents in the wall are kind of distracting. The portion of the wall that's to the left of the seam looks to be in good condition. Maybe it's possible to move the entire set to the left so it's in front of the wall without the dents.
Jul 10, 2016 20:57:44 #
CO wrote:
That's an outstanding set you have with just the p... (show quote)
LR/PS will dispatch the seam and dents in a jiffy.
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Jul 11, 2016 09:56:38 #
RichieC
Loc: Adirondacks
Seam is an easy fix as are those "dents". I like it the first two because of the vignette in the lighting.
Jul 14, 2016 06:13:07 #
agree that the second picture is by far the best. wider range of light there helps it as well as the simple layout.....take whatever that is on the table off and leave just the three elements and you have winner.
Jul 14, 2016 08:44:40 #
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Mar 14, 2021 18:04:01 #
John Hicks
Loc: Sible Hedinham North Essex England
Good set of pictures simple composition but very effective
Mar 18, 2021 18:12:57 #
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Mar 22, 2021 11:30:40 #
I don't see why the seam bothers some people. It adds to the realism of the photo, as if it is shot in an old house. I like the classic look.
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