artBob wrote:
The advice you've gotten seems good to me, as well as the compliment that you are mostly picking interesting subjects. I like to play, so I've taken the advice about getting in tight with your subject, leaving room to motion, and telling a "story"--and applied it to two of your pics.
I do not see these as an improvement. The boat is still not interesting and the turkey is now cramped. The turkey was shot wrong in the first place - nothing will help that image.