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Re-Consideration for Contest
Mar 3, 2016 18:43:54   #
BigBear Loc: Northern CT
 
By popular request, I removed the questionable objects from in front of the bird.

I don't normally do much in PP other than lighting.
Further comments are welcome.


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Mar 3, 2016 18:47:33   #
RichardTaylor Loc: Sydney, Australia
 
Looks a lot better to me.

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Mar 3, 2016 19:28:19   #
BigBear Loc: Northern CT
 
RichardTaylor wrote:
Looks a lot better to me.


Thank you Sir !!

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Mar 3, 2016 19:51:33   #
BassmanBruce Loc: Middle of the Mitten
 
I have to agree that it's an improvement.
I really like the low perspective you got.

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Mar 3, 2016 20:23:57   #
BigBear Loc: Northern CT
 
BassmanBruce wrote:
I have to agree that it's an improvement.
I really like the low perspective you got.


Thank you. I was literally eye to eye with it.

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Mar 3, 2016 20:52:56   #
Nightski
 
Oh yeah! Wow .. you are much better at pp than me. :-) I like it. I do love a shot with an animal in deep grasses peeking out. The eyes have got to be sharp in that instance, but I think it works because it's a case where the viewer has to work to find the payoff. This little bird is different. It's the subject plain as day, just a few little strands of grass don't enhance .. they distract. Mushroom shooters are one of the biggest offenders with this distraction. You did a nice job, BigBear and I hope you do well. You've got a nicely composed subject with great detail and color. I like the dark background.

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Mar 3, 2016 21:01:04   #
BigBear Loc: Northern CT
 
Nightski wrote:
Oh yeah! Wow .. you are much better at pp than me. :-) I like it. I do love a shot with an animal in deep grasses peeking out. The eyes have got to be sharp in that instance, but I think it works because it's a case where the viewer has to work to find the payoff. This little bird is different. It's the subject plain as day, just a few little strands of grass don't enhance .. they distract. Mushroom shooters are one of the biggest offenders with this distraction. You did a nice job, BigBear and I hope you do well. You've got a nicely composed subject with great detail and color. I like the dark background.
Oh yeah! Wow .. you are much better at pp than me.... (show quote)


Thank You Ma'am. I appreciate your comment.
If I choose this one to enter, I will post the result.
I do have a couple more to consider.

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Mar 4, 2016 09:32:17   #
ecobin Loc: Paoli, PA
 
Love it - winner!

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Mar 4, 2016 10:53:54   #
Jules Karney Loc: Las Vegas, Nevada
 
BigBear wrote:
By popular request, I removed the questionable objects from in front of the bird.

I don't normally do much in PP other than lighting.
Further comments are welcome.


Much better. Great pic. Good luck in the contest.

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Mar 4, 2016 11:56:41   #
BigBear Loc: Northern CT
 
ecobin wrote:
Love it - winner!


Thank you much !!

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Mar 4, 2016 11:57:57   #
BigBear Loc: Northern CT
 
Jules Karney wrote:
Much better. Great pic. Good luck in the contest.


Thank you so much !!
I will let everyone know the result.

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Mar 4, 2016 20:14:44   #
AzPicLady Loc: Behind the camera!
 
Yes. Well done

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Mar 4, 2016 21:25:08   #
raymondh Loc: Walker, MI
 
I like the simplicity of the composition. Very nice contrast & tone.
I am puzzled but the dark spot on top of his head - perhaps he was missing a feather?

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Mar 4, 2016 22:00:58   #
BigBear Loc: Northern CT
 
AzPicLady wrote:
Yes. Well done


Thank you Ma'am !!

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Mar 4, 2016 22:02:39   #
BigBear Loc: Northern CT
 
raymondh wrote:
I like the simplicity of the composition. Very nice contrast & tone.
I am puzzled but the dark spot on top of his head - perhaps he was missing a feather?


Thank you for your comment.

He may have some out of place.
I have a similar issue.

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