That's a VERY good review, Jwilliams. You touched on all the things that need improvement. That's the kind of critiquing that helps us all become better photographers. Very well done.
Jwilliams0469 wrote:
Sorry don't care for the flamed background, kind'of a lifeless style photograph (meaning she'd rather burn in the underworld then to live life on Earth and Heavens above).
on the second set, I think the first is adorable, very nicely propped. On the 3rd the bar or whatever it is, it's very distracting. Not to mention she's formally dressed and in a very wrong place. The pose is off as well.
Sorry I couldn't say anything better, but, I'm just being honest.
The subject is beautiful, the backgrounds on two are just completely wrong.
But in the end, if the subject likes them, so be it. I wouldn't even attempt something like this and most likely would be embarrassed to show the to the subject.
I will say the black on black is good love the pose but the subject, blends and does not stand out very well. It is the best of the 3.
Have a nice day! Happy shooting!
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