Senior Hottie
Oct 14, 2011 12:39:09 #
That's a VERY good review, Jwilliams. You touched on all the things that need improvement. That's the kind of critiquing that helps us all become better photographers. Very well done.
Jwilliams0469 wrote:
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Oct 14, 2011 13:52:20 #
I am no expert and you have gotten their opinion, but I have seen a lot of senior portraits lately and I can see them loving the third. I have a friend who does high end senior pictures and she takes them to places like this. I would have cropped it in tighter and gotten rid of the bar thing though.
I do like the black on black and think she will also. I actually like the pose in the fire picture, but the fire is a bit much for my taste. I will guess that this young lady may love it.
I do like the black on black and think she will also. I actually like the pose in the fire picture, but the fire is a bit much for my taste. I will guess that this young lady may love it.
Oct 14, 2011 14:00:12 #
I sorry, I have to disagree with the people who like the last pic-she looks like a street hooker in that shot. The one above it is far better.
Oct 14, 2011 14:00:38 #
Prospect Acres
Loc: Northwestern Ohio
Country's Mama wrote:
I am no expert and you have gotten their opinion, but I have seen a lot of senior portraits lately and I can see them loving the third. I have a friend who does high end senior pictures and she takes them to places like this. I would have cropped it in tighter and gotten rid of the bar thing though.
I do like the black on black and think she will also. I actually like the pose in the fire picture, but the fire is a bit much for my taste. I will guess that this young lady may love it.
I do like the black on black and think she will also. I actually like the pose in the fire picture, but the fire is a bit much for my taste. I will guess that this young lady may love it.
I do have the third image without the rail road post thingy. but personally I liked it there. Also for my taste the fire is not my favorite but it images like this seem to be the thing around my area. Gotta give them what they want.
Oct 14, 2011 14:05:29 #
Oct 14, 2011 14:08:43 #
Prospect Acres
Loc: Northwestern Ohio
JimH wrote:
I sorry, I have to disagree with the people who like the last pic-she looks like a street hooker in that shot. The one above it is far better.
I understand Jim, and I don't think I would want my 17-18 yr old daughter to look like that but when she and mom came in, mom's instuctions were they like close ups and she wants to look sexy. To each his own I guess.
Oct 14, 2011 14:14:25 #
Oct 14, 2011 14:15:57 #
Oct 14, 2011 14:31:21 #
Prospect Acres wrote:
I understand Jim, and I don't think I would want my 17-18 yr old daughter to look like that but when she and mom came in, mom's instuctions were they like close ups and she wants to look sexy. To each his own I guess.
Yeah, but that third one isn't a close up. The middle one is the keeper.
Oct 14, 2011 15:06:47 #
I'm a nature photographer, mostly (amateur), a lot of macros, scenic stuff, long zooms, flowers, insects, animals, some architectural things. I couldn't do senior/portrait type photos to save my soul. I'm a woods/out-in-the-bush guy. Spend a lot of time beating around outside, carry a Canon SX30 IS in a fanny pack. None-the-less, I'll attach a couple shots taken recently for your review.
frank bruce wrote:
mr gizzywicker, why dont u submit something for us to see?
Buckeye
Hoop & Sticks Game
Oct 14, 2011 15:48:43 #
Oct 14, 2011 16:27:40 #
Well. Mr. Frank Bruce, I don't consider myself a creative photographer by any stretch of the imagination. I spent far too many years at Engineering Computer CAD work to develop a creative side. But from the thousands of photos stored on various drives, I'll post five that might be a bit more creative than what I usually shoot. If you want something more creative than these, you'll have to go ask some of the pros.
frank bruce wrote:
thanks mr gizzy! do u have something a bit more creative?
Moon at Cave-In-Rock
Spider Beside Her - Macro
Stage Fright - Lincoln Log Cabin SP, ILL
Sunrise Over Mississippi
Yeah Team
Oct 14, 2011 18:09:00 #
thank you mr "gizzy" thats a cool name by the way. i've submitted a couple more. please help me out and give me any comments. maybe we can start a chat on a subject. chek'em out frank bruce
the void
Oct 14, 2011 18:11:35 #
Oct 14, 2011 18:14:28 #
You lost me in the VOID, ol' boy. I fail to get a focal point... or perhaps that's the intent? In my humble opinion I think I'd try a little something different. That one just doesn't jump out at me like I guess it should.
frank bruce wrote:
thank you mr "gizzy" thats a cool name by the way. i've submitted a couple more. please help me out and give me any comments. maybe we can start a chat on a subject. chek'em out frank bruce
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