WPC 1514 - Easter Eggs CRITIQUE
Apr 11, 2015 02:44:45 #
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Be nice, but be honest as this may help everyone with their craft. Thank you everyone!
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Who needs to color Easter eggs? This lovely clutch of eggs come from beautiful happy healthy chickens who roam free on a farm in Cocoa, Florida.
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Apr 11, 2015 07:27:24 #
I think your right on on your focus. Your depth of field encompasses the whole basket leaving the other basket slightly out of focus .
I do think the angle of the shot is off. I feel like the eggs are falling out of the basket. I think maybe if you got a little lower and leveled out your camera. Get rid of the egg carton and include more of the second basket.
I do think the angle of the shot is off. I feel like the eggs are falling out of the basket. I think maybe if you got a little lower and leveled out your camera. Get rid of the egg carton and include more of the second basket.
Apr 11, 2015 08:15:06 #
Apr 12, 2015 07:31:04 #
St3v3M said in part: "chickens who roam free on a farm in Cocoa, Florida. "
I saw this photo as having a rainbow tolerance theme, "Regardless of Color We are All-Good-Eggs." This way the eggs become the theme and the focus is there, the basket clutters the photo.
The basket is not the story, simply documentation. I used a vignetting off center toward upper right to shade down the basket yet allowing it to seen as the source of the straws.
Good shot, it is hard to get white eggs without clipping. I appreciate you have the old age spot egg, looks similar to my hands!!! With your permission I could post my interpretation.
I saw this photo as having a rainbow tolerance theme, "Regardless of Color We are All-Good-Eggs." This way the eggs become the theme and the focus is there, the basket clutters the photo.
The basket is not the story, simply documentation. I used a vignetting off center toward upper right to shade down the basket yet allowing it to seen as the source of the straws.
Good shot, it is hard to get white eggs without clipping. I appreciate you have the old age spot egg, looks similar to my hands!!! With your permission I could post my interpretation.
Apr 13, 2015 12:42:27 #
St3v3M wrote:
PW4GDF's WPC Entry has been selected for the Photo Critique Forum* to find out what could have done to make it better.
Be nice, but be honest as this may help everyone with their craft. Thank you everyone!
From WPC 1514 - Easter Eggs RESULTS http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/photo_contest_ratings.jsp?pcnum=164
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Be nice, but be honest as this may help everyone with their craft. Thank you everyone!
From WPC 1514 - Easter Eggs RESULTS http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/photo_contest_ratings.jsp?pcnum=164
* If you are new to the Photo Critique Forum please read the Section Rules http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/t-279264-1.html
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Really like the eggs in their natural pastel colors rather than compliments of Paas egg dye. The "feel" I get from looking at them is a soft warm feel which is enhanced by the natural basket. That foam commercial egg tray in the left rear is a definite distraction, and the image would probably be more effective shot from lower, catching the eggs from more of an angle rather than so straight-down.
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