Mandolin and Notes
Jan 18, 2015 13:26:03 #
I'd be very interested to know if you think this is presentable. I used a mask layer in PS and then added the sepia. If you think this is not very good, then I'd be interested to hear that as well.
Jan 18, 2015 13:43:16 #
Jan 18, 2015 13:43:18 #
ebrunner wrote:
I'd be very interested to know if you think this is presentable. I used a mask layer in PS and then added the sepia. If you think this is not very good, then I'd be interested to hear that as well.
It looks darn good Erich. The sepia tone is tastefully done and looks very natural with your subject matter.
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Jan 18, 2015 13:46:07 #
Jan 18, 2015 14:24:24 #
dragonswing wrote:
Looks a bit too dark for my taste. Maybe add a bit of contrast?
Thank you for the input. I was wondering about that. I did not want the notes to take center stage; but I may have kept them a bit too obscure. Thanks. Good information.
Jan 18, 2015 14:26:57 #
Bob Yankle wrote:
It looks darn good Erich. The sepia tone is tastefully done and looks very natural with your subject matter.
Thank you. I like the sepia. I also liked the table and it was quite a chore getting my wife to allow me to "play" with her inlaid antique table. My standard glass coffee table with a sheet over it would not have been the trick for this shot. I do appreciate the input and I'm glad you liked it.
Jan 18, 2015 14:27:36 #
ebbote wrote:
Excellent Erich, your comp and tone are perfect.
Thank you so much for the endorsement. I do appreciate you taking a look.
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Jan 18, 2015 16:41:03 #
Just one of those personal preference things: for me, the decorative details of the table distract from the message of the music theme.
Jan 18, 2015 16:46:26 #
Linda From Maine wrote:
Just one of those personal preference things: for me, the decorative details of the table distract from the message of the music theme.
I agree, I would cut off the front of the table, the lowest 20% of the picture. Focus on the instrument.
Jan 18, 2015 17:47:25 #
ebrunner wrote:
I'd be very interested to know if you think this is presentable. I used a mask layer in PS and then added the sepia. If you think this is not very good, then I'd be interested to hear that as well.
Needs more contrast. But otherwise I love it.
Jan 18, 2015 18:03:46 #
Linda From Maine wrote:
Just one of those personal preference things: for me, the decorative details of the table distract from the message of the music theme.
That is an interesting response. I really had not thought of that before. I do understand where you are coming from. I can see where the fiddly bits could detract from the subject. Thank you for your input. I will certainly give that some serious consideration.
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Jan 18, 2015 18:06:25 #
[quote=JPL]I agree, I would cut off the front of the table, the lowest 20% of the picture. Focus on the instrument.[/qu
Ok, that is information that I was looking for thank you. Not sure I agree; but it is good to hear opinions. Thank you.
Ok, that is information that I was looking for thank you. Not sure I agree; but it is good to hear opinions. Thank you.
Jan 18, 2015 18:07:32 #
Corolyn wrote:
Needs more contrast. But otherwise I love it.
I'm planning on printing this, so I will have to add some contrast before I do. Thank you. I do agree with you.
Jan 19, 2015 10:31:20 #
good separation from the background... i think the lighting is flat though, no drama.
i like the path your on with it... i think your 95% there.
jvo
i like the path your on with it... i think your 95% there.
jvo
Jan 19, 2015 14:28:53 #
My thoughts - crop closer, show only top of stand - move book to 45 degree to left corner and allow 1" of table to left of book - align Mandolin with book aprox - place sheet music under Mandolin with a few notes showing - keep BG
These items could be arranged and lighted in so many ways all would be great. There is an Old Masters painting ( do not know name or Artist) with a Mandolin that since you have one it would be interesting to duplicate.
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These items could be arranged and lighted in so many ways all would be great. There is an Old Masters painting ( do not know name or Artist) with a Mandolin that since you have one it would be interesting to duplicate.
As presented :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup:
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